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Miranda Chronicles: Teacher's Pet

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Miranda finds herself in another situation.

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Comment from BethShelby
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Wow! that is a lot of cash. I know you need to do something about that sticky Dr. Pepper, but I have a feeling that reaction wasn't whan anyone anticipated, especially the photographer. I'm not sure where you found there so since this is part of the story I don't know. I do remember something later about a car in a lake. I hope when Miranda gets cleaned up she at least thanks them for the gesture.

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
    Miranda found a missing man's body and that's where the reward came from. It's from the first Miranda book. Thank you so much. Gretchen
Comment from Ric Myworld
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I don't know why it is that I don't ever have a six when I need it most. It must have something to do with all the bad things I've done throughout my life. It's paybacks. It's like standing naked to the world, so people people can point out my shortcomings, or largest mistakes.
Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
    Lol. I don't worry about sixes because I often go through mine in one afternoon. Thank you for this nice review. Gretchen
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Wow, this is a shock and I was wondering who Ms Barkley was, glad you explained that. This is a little bit of good fortune for Miranda and she has been overcome with emotion, another fine chapter Gretchen, love Dolly x

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 Comment Written 21-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
    Thank you, Dolly. I'm sure friends who Miranda never knew will be coming out of the woodwork. Gretchen
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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If Colleen was a decent person, which she's not, she would have given Miranda an opportunity to clean herself up a little. Things are going downhill. What else could possibly go wrong? I know it will. Thank you for sharing this story with us. I really like it.
 
I finally relent and sit down on a stack of cokes. (you can omit 'down')

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 Comment Written 21-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
    Thank you so much. Nothing is ever simple for Miranda. Gretchen