Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very well written free form poem about spring break. You used very good words with great imagery and very nice imagery from the artwork you chose. Best wishes in the contest. Teri

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 20-Nov-2024

Thanks so very much Teri.
Luv&stuff
Katiemae1977

Comment from royowen

Excellent

It may be a while before it's your kids have a break, except for Christmas, our kids have about a six week break shortly KatieMae. I like your approach to this with your articulate, expressive narrative, well done, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 20-Nov-2024

Thank so very much Roy! So glad you l8ked my narrative.
Luv&stuff
Katiemae1977

reply by royowen on 20-Nov-2024

Pleasure

Comment from Mia Twysted

Excellent

Summer break is something I wish we had as adults. You paint a wonderful picture in the reader's mind. I could feel thee excitement as the final bell of the year rang.

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 Comment Written 20-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 20-Nov-2024

Thanks so very much Mia. I'm glad the poem resonated with you.
Luv&stuff
Katiemae1977

Comment from DonandVicki

Excellent

I can remember the feeling of excitement we felt as children when we were released from school during summer break. There is no other way of describing the feeling of freedom.

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 Comment Written 20-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 20-Nov-2024

Thanks so very much Donald! I'm glad the poem resonated with you.