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In valleys of despair

A modified quatern

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Comment from estory
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This poem speaks of the necessity of tribulation, temptation, in order to discipline are faith and bring us to a relationship with God. Much as these things worked on Job in his trials. I think the image of the stony valley, the difficult terrain, is a great image to illustrate this narrow, difficult path. estory

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 20-Nov-2024
    Thanks for these wonderful comments and a super review, blessings Roy
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Satan is always there to attempt to persuade us to follow him. But God is always available to keep up on the right track. We just need to allow Him to do that. I don't see how people can tackle this journey of life with God's help. Thank you for sharing this reminder with us.

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 20-Nov-2024
    Thanks Barbara for these most helpful comments and review, blessings Roy
Comment from Janet Foor
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A beautiful modified quatern poem of faith my friend. Life is hard and I don't know how people without faith can survive the despair that we all face from time to time.

Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 20-Nov-2024
    Thanks for these terrific comments and review, blessings Roy
Comment from jim vecchio
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Sometimes Satan gets me to thinking of all my losses, especially my wife, but I try not to let him gain the victory. God has blessed me many times over in the past few years.I am thankful for Hid Holy Spirit.

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 20-Nov-2024
    Thanks Jim for these exceptional comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Sally Law
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Thank you, my brother. Your spiritual poem is a gift to us, especially to me. Truly, without my Lord Jesus Christ, His cleaning of sin and resurrection from the dead, despair would have swallowed me whole.
Sending you my best today as slwau and Blessings in His Name.
Sal xoxo

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 20-Nov-2024
    Thanks Sally for these wonderful comments and a super review, blessings Roy
Comment from Tim Margetts
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Roy
Your poetry as always, touches my heart and gives my soul its daily boost.
For that I thank you and I also lift my eyes and thank the Boss for giving you this gift of sharing your faith in this way.
Every Blessing my riend
Tim

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 20-Nov-2024
    Thanks Tim, for these wonderful comments and a super review, blessings Roy
Comment from RJ Heritage
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I continue to feel the deliverance of God in my life as x I go through the valle of dispair. These powerful words have c reminded me, and indeed all who read them, of the love we have in God through faith in His promises.
RJ

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 20-Nov-2024
    Thanks RJ, for these wonderful comments and a super review, blessings Roy
reply by RJ Heritage on 20-Nov-2024
    You're welcome
    RJ
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
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In the midst of tempests and doubt and fear, His presence is what settles us, and it is in these valleys of despair that we learn to grow.

You just said it a lot better than me, Roy:-)

xo
Pam

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 20-Nov-2024
    Thanks Pam, for these wonderful comments and a super review, blessings Roy
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
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I love the fact you give us your reasoning and research. You are constantly reaching and growing. You try new ways and new styles. I also, have tried many different types of poetry, and forms of stories and different categories of stories. Some may bomb. but, I learn:-)

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 20-Nov-2024
    Thanks Karen for these wonderful comments and a super review, blessings Roy
Comment from lyenochka
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It's true when we come to the end of ourselves, we lean more on God and less on ourselves. I like how you modified this Quatern poem to change the spiritual growth in the valleys of despair into actually learning.

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 20-Nov-2024
    Thanks Helen for these kindest comments and review, blessings Roy