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Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your words here are so wonderful to read. The imagery in your poem is wonderful. That final line, is perfect. This piece really has such passion and beauty - just stunning!
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
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Your words here are so wonderful to read. The imagery in your poem is wonderful. That final line, is perfect. This piece really has such passion and beauty - just stunning!
Comment Written 29-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy
Comment from patcelaw
Nicely done for the poem appointment. I enjoyed very much reading. I wish you the very best to your writing and I also wish you the very best for the week. May God bless you and may you be safe in his arms.
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
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Nicely done for the poem appointment. I enjoyed very much reading. I wish you the very best to your writing and I also wish you the very best for the week. May God bless you and may you be safe in his arms.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy
Comment from lyenochka
You always cover the passion of lovers so well. I especially liked "drink deep
from the river of yearning
amid the thresh of rivery lands"
The yearning comes from knowing that sense of being at home in one another.
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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
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You always cover the passion of lovers so well. I especially liked "drink deep
from the river of yearning
amid the thresh of rivery lands"
The yearning comes from knowing that sense of being at home in one another.
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Comment Written 29-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much 😊 big sister.
❤️ Marival
Comment from DonandVicki
This speaks deeply of love and yearning. The artwork complements your work well."drink deep from the river of yearning." I think this line affected me the most.
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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
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This speaks deeply of love and yearning. The artwork complements your work well."drink deep from the river of yearning." I think this line affected me the most.
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Comment Written 29-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy