Comment from Begin Again

Excellent

I hope today finds you feeling well and smiling at the world. I know you have blessed us with only twenty syllables but ones filled with lasting love. It was beautiful. Thank you for sharing.
Smiles, Carol

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024

Thanks so much Carol for your lovely comments and review.
❤️
Katherine

Comment from royowen

Excellent

The Lord is our lover and our king, our saviour and our advocate, He loves our soulr, He dances over us with singing, He will never leave us or forsake, we only need to believe on Him, and He will rescuer us. Beautifully written KatieMae, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024

Thanks so very much Roy for your lovely comments and review!
Luv&stuff
Katiemae1977

reply by royowen on 30-Oct-2024

My pleasure

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

These sound like intimate marriage vows that keep us close and always set our spirits free as our love soothes us encourages us to fly, much enjoyed Katiemae, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024

Thanks for stopping by to read and review Dolly!
Luv&stuff
Katiemae1977

Comment from DonandVicki

Excellent

A well composed twenty syllable poem that inspires love and two people becoming one. The photograph complements your work. Love sets our spirits free.

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024

Thanks for stopping by to read and review!
Luv&stuff
Katherine

Comment from Robert Zimmerman

Excellent

This is very nicely conceived and written. It reads very well with the iambic foot. It always has been, and always will be my favorite. Good luck in the contest.
Robert.

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024

Thanks so very much Robert!
Luv&stuff
Katiemae1977

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Very nice artwork and presentation, Katiemae.
-You did a good job with your 20 syllables.
-A very good message about love and
what it can do, like setting your "spirit free."
-A very good entry.
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024

Thanks so much Pam for your review and good luck wishes.
Luv&stuff
Katiemae1977

reply by Pam (respa) on 30-Oct-2024

You are very welcome, Katiemae.

Comment from Shirley Ann Bunyan

Excellent

Such an interesting and beautiful concept that in tying the spirit to another so pure it acts to set the spirit free.
A small poem with huge heart.
Thank you.

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024

Thanks so very much for your lovely comments and review Shirley.
Luv&stuff
Katiemae1977

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

Beautiful, Katherine! Your 20 syllable verse reads fluently, enhanced by your rhyme and meter. It isn't, in fact, a couplet though because it has 3 lines instead of 2. But that doesn't affect its compliance with the contest brief. Well done and good luck! Debbie

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024

Thanks so very much Debbie for reading and reviewing my poem. I'll fix than line so that it is a couplet.
Luv&stuff
Katiemae1977

Comment from Mark D. R.

Excellent

Katie,

I do like this entry for its deep meaning about love.

The construction of your middle line bothers me just a bit.

Did you mean :

Your love, 'divine,' (sic) has set
....

Or might it be rewritten as:
Your divine love has set
....

Nice overall presentation with your artwork and color choices.

Mark

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 28-Oct-2024

Thanks Mark for reviewing. I see what you mean in that 2nd line. Esthetically I went with what I wrote. Personally, I thought it was more poetic.
Thanks again.
Katiemae1977

Comment from GWHARGIS

Excellent

This could be interpreted two different ways. The first is romantic. As a soul mate changing your life. The other way is religious. It was almost a worshipful prayer. Great job. Gretchen

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 Comment Written 28-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 28-Oct-2024

Thanks so very much Gretchen. I can see what you mean. Glad you liked it.
Luv&stuff
Katherine