Patch and Ruby
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Patch and Ruby Plan a BD Party"Patch is Helen's cat and Ruby is Kenzie's cat
45 total reviews
Comment from jaded831
Fun poem, well written both for children and adults. Your poems always manage to delight me. I like how the cat they all thought would put a damper on things watched, turned over and smiled. Greart ending.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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Fun poem, well written both for children and adults. Your poems always manage to delight me. I like how the cat they all thought would put a damper on things watched, turned over and smiled. Greart ending.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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Jaded, you are so sweet. I thank you for the most delightful comments for my silly cat poem. This is the fourth one in my book and I am hoping to write enough for a children's book. However, then the alcohol lines will have to be changed. LOL. Thanks again my sweet friend. I appreciate it so much. You gave me the biggest smile.
Love, Debi
Comment from Shanbreen
Debi, once again, you put a smile on my face. Best of all, I admire your ever expanding imagination. And where the heck did you get a painting of cats dancing? Well done, and thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2024
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Debi, once again, you put a smile on my face. Best of all, I admire your ever expanding imagination. And where the heck did you get a painting of cats dancing? Well done, and thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2024
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Hi Shanbreen, I'm so glad that you had fun with me and my silly cats poem. They are so much fun to write and I am hoping some day to do a real book with them. However, I suppose I should take the alcohol out then. LOL.
I get the pictures from my Pinterest account.
Thanks for all your kind comments for this one. Love, Debi
Comment from dragonpoet
This is a cut story and I like all the cat puns, Debi. I like how you use fellow fanstorians' cats in your story. There seems to be a lot of cat people here.
I had pet cats when I was little. But I can't own them now because my husband is allergic.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a great week.
Joan
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2024
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This is a cut story and I like all the cat puns, Debi. I like how you use fellow fanstorians' cats in your story. There seems to be a lot of cat people here.
I had pet cats when I was little. But I can't own them now because my husband is allergic.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a great week.
Joan
Comment Written 14-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2024
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Hi Joan, I'm so glad that you had fun with me and my silly cats poem. They are so much fun to write and I am hoping some day to do a real book with them. I used to be allergic too, but I outgrew it.
Thanks for all your kind comments for this one. Love, Debi
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You're welcome, Debi. It was a fun poem.
Joan
Comment from Janet Foor
A fun and funny poem Debi. I love your creative style and play on words.
A delightful story of three cats at play mand the mischief they can get into as cats are always likely to do.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2024
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A fun and funny poem Debi. I love your creative style and play on words.
A delightful story of three cats at play mand the mischief they can get into as cats are always likely to do.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 14-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2024
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Hi Janet, I'm so glad that you had fun with me and my silly cats poem. They are so much fun to write and I am hoping some day to do a real book with them.
Thanks for all your kind comments for this one. Love, Debi
Comment from Ulla
Aw isn't this just too sweet. I love how you incorporate Helen's cat and and your granddaughter's cat. Are other cats allowed to participate? Because, I have a most naughty female cat you could add to the story. Lol. Ulla xx
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2024
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Aw isn't this just too sweet. I love how you incorporate Helen's cat and and your granddaughter's cat. Are other cats allowed to participate? Because, I have a most naughty female cat you could add to the story. Lol. Ulla xx
Comment Written 14-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2024
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Ulla, this is the 4th one of Patch and Ruby's poems and the first time we added another cat, so I would love to get your naughty one in there the next time if I can think of maybe a play date with a couple as Teri asked for one of hers too. So, what is her name. I will start thinking on my next one right away. They are so much fun to write and hoping at some point to (take the alcohol out of this one) LOL.. and use them all in a children's book. Did you read any of the others that are in the book? You might remember them trying to find Helen's muse (mews) haha.
Anyway, thanks and I look forward to hearing from you. We will talk soon. Love. Debi
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Hi Debi, thanks for being open to my idea. I will certainly go back and read more about the stories.
Now, my cat's name is Pepina, and she's a rascal. Aren't all cats?
If you want to feature her I will tell you more about her and the origin of her name, which is all of my making. Lol.
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That is adorable.
It will be fun to add her for a poem. Yes, I would love to know more about her. Thanks.
Comment from LateBloomer
Hi Debi, very cute. I'm sure that many cat parties have at least one good "cat fight." Patch, Ruby, and Catzilla are quite a trio. Of special note:
Some meowgaritas were alright
'Till whisk-E Sour Puss had to fight
(When the alcohol begins to flow, anything can happen.)
Great photo choice. This poem made me smile. Xo. M
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2024
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Hi Debi, very cute. I'm sure that many cat parties have at least one good "cat fight." Patch, Ruby, and Catzilla are quite a trio. Of special note:
Some meowgaritas were alright
'Till whisk-E Sour Puss had to fight
(When the alcohol begins to flow, anything can happen.)
Great photo choice. This poem made me smile. Xo. M
Comment Written 14-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2024
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Hey Sis, gosh it is good to see you again. I'm so glad that you had fun with me and my silly cats poem. They are so much fun to write and I am hoping some day to do a real book with them. However, I will have to take the alcohol out at that time. LOL.
Thanks for all your kind comments for this one. Love, Debi
Comment from Ric Myworld
Now you've gone and put together a kitty party that might have everyone lined up for admission. I mean, a "meowgarita" even sounds good to me. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2024
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Now you've gone and put together a kitty party that might have everyone lined up for admission. I mean, a "meowgarita" even sounds good to me. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2024
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Hi there, Ric, I'm so glad that you had fun with me and my silly cats poem. They are so much fun to write and I am hoping some day to do a real book with them. However, I suppose I should take the alcohol out then. LOL.
Thanks for all your kind comments for this one. Love, Debi
Comment from Todd Bourgeois
What a cute little piece of what cats do when we're not around. Love the imagery and the sense of mischievousness. I loved the way you played with the words to make them more "catty", like "whisk-E Sour Puss" and "intoxicats". And wrap it all up with us humans watching cat videos until we fall asleep. This speaks on so many levels. Thanks for the smile while I read this.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2024
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What a cute little piece of what cats do when we're not around. Love the imagery and the sense of mischievousness. I loved the way you played with the words to make them more "catty", like "whisk-E Sour Puss" and "intoxicats". And wrap it all up with us humans watching cat videos until we fall asleep. This speaks on so many levels. Thanks for the smile while I read this.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2024
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Hi Todd, I'm so glad that you had fun with me and my silly cats poem. They are so much fun to write and I am hoping some day to do a real book with them. However, I suppose I should take the alcohol out then. LOL.
Thanks for all your kind comments for this one. Love, Debi
Comment from bob cullen
What a sweet and delightful verse. Two Debbi's in a row. And both so talented. Your cats sound almost as mischevious as my Jeanette's. And from the sound of them just as annoying. Your writing really is among the best on Fanstory. So much envy here. Another fine example of how poetry should be written.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2024
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What a sweet and delightful verse. Two Debbi's in a row. And both so talented. Your cats sound almost as mischevious as my Jeanette's. And from the sound of them just as annoying. Your writing really is among the best on Fanstory. So much envy here. Another fine example of how poetry should be written.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2024
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Hi Bob, I'm so glad that you had fun with me and my silly cats poem. They are so much fun to write and I am hoping some day to do a real book with them. However, I suppose I should take the alcohol out then. LOL.
Your sweet comments about both Debbi's made my day.
Thanks for all your kind comments for this one. Love, Debi
Comment from ESOSTINE
Your poem flow very well and makes an interesting read. Your creativity and sense of imagination is very much on display here. Thanks so much for sharing your work. Remain blessed, dear Debi.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2024
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Your poem flow very well and makes an interesting read. Your creativity and sense of imagination is very much on display here. Thanks so much for sharing your work. Remain blessed, dear Debi.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2024
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Esostine, thanks so much for such a sweet review and comments for my fourth poem of these two silly cats. I appreciate you having some fun with me.
Love, Debi