Spirited Justice
Viewing comments for Chapter 30 "Spirited Justice Chap 30"Mystery, crime and ghostly high jinks
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Comment from karenina
Adorable conversation.... teasing between Mom and Daughter... (Oh that Elanor has quite the wit!)
Need I repeat I'm a romantic? Sweet scenes between Jenna and Donnatelli...
And Patty?
Wow. how wrong could I have been? Is she in on ALL of this or did the neck squeezing man put her up to this?
Thank Goodness Danni picked up on "something"--
Whew!
This detective stuff is entertaining AND exhausting!
:)
Karenina
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2024
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Adorable conversation.... teasing between Mom and Daughter... (Oh that Elanor has quite the wit!)
Need I repeat I'm a romantic? Sweet scenes between Jenna and Donnatelli...
And Patty?
Wow. how wrong could I have been? Is she in on ALL of this or did the neck squeezing man put her up to this?
Thank Goodness Danni picked up on "something"--
Whew!
This detective stuff is entertaining AND exhausting!
:)
Karenina
Comment Written 28-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2024
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Tell me about it! I still have to write a chapter for tomorrow morning and read...read,,,read... I think I might be about to get kicked out. LOl
I am thrilled that you enjoyed the chapters... It's been so much fun writing them and having you back just makes me feel awesome.
LOve ya, Carol
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I couldn't believe how prolific you've been! I better take care of myself or I'll never keep up!
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You JUST BETTER take care of yourself!
Comment from Aiona
Characterization is good. I love the dialogue. It's very easy to read, and even coming into the story at Chapter 20, I understand the relationships between the characters, even without reading the notes at the end. It sounds from the summary that this a mystery story, right? But this chapter reads more like a budding romance novel. Is it a combination?
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2024
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Characterization is good. I love the dialogue. It's very easy to read, and even coming into the story at Chapter 20, I understand the relationships between the characters, even without reading the notes at the end. It sounds from the summary that this a mystery story, right? But this chapter reads more like a budding romance novel. Is it a combination?
Comment Written 28-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2024
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It's a mystery crime with even a resident ghost...this is the second of the series and it's about to wrap up in a few more chapters... The budding romance is something I will carry over into the third book of the series. Thank you so much for taking a look at the chapter. I appreciate your comments.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Carol Clark2
Jenna and Donatelli had a lovely evening together, a nice surprise. It seems Patti is up to something no good. It's good that Danni can be there undetected. Good chapter, a little bit of a breather from all the intensity of the book. Blessings. Carol
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2024
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Jenna and Donatelli had a lovely evening together, a nice surprise. It seems Patti is up to something no good. It's good that Danni can be there undetected. Good chapter, a little bit of a breather from all the intensity of the book. Blessings. Carol
Comment Written 28-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2024
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Yes, it's beginning to slow down and things will be wrapping up...then something small for October and the third in the series I think in November. thanks so much for sticking with me, Carol. I really appreciate it.
Smiles, Carol
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I'm glad you're already planning for the next book. Looking forward to it. Have a wonderful weekend.
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Thanks and I do believe that the third one will the best and one everyone should love... lot more emotions like the first one.
Smiles, Carol
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Oh, good.
Comment from patcelaw
This story is very beautiful and it has been written by an e excellentand beautiful larger. I enjoyed very much listening to it and I wish you the very best with all of your writing. Also, wish you a wonderful weekend and may God bless you.
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2024
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This story is very beautiful and it has been written by an e excellentand beautiful larger. I enjoyed very much listening to it and I wish you the very best with all of your writing. Also, wish you a wonderful weekend and may God bless you.
Comment Written 28-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2024
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Thanks so much, Patricia. I appreciate your time and thoughts. Hope you are feeling okay while you wait for further tests. Take care.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I am glad Jenna and Matthew had a great dinner together. They're a cute couple. I can't wait to see what Patti is up to. I don't trust her. I really like this story.
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2024
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I am glad Jenna and Matthew had a great dinner together. They're a cute couple. I can't wait to see what Patti is up to. I don't trust her. I really like this story.
Comment Written 28-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2024
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Patti has got herself in a bind and I'm not sure how she is going to escape... And Jenna and Matthew hopefully can work things out between them....(Hope so since it works into the next story ) lol
Smiles, Carol
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I hope so too. I like those two together.
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I think my ideas for the third in the series will be the best yet...More about the characters getting involved in things than someone else's crimes. I'm not positive yet but I'm rolling around the ideas in my head.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I wish my mum would pop in for a while like Eleanor does with Jenna. I'm glad Matthew went with Jenna; I'm sure there is more to their relationship that neither realises yet. Now, what is Patti up to sneaking in the back door? I don't trust her. I was surprised to see another chapter already, keep them coming!! Another lovely chapter, and a lovely bit of romance in it too!! Well done, my clever friend. Love and hugs. Sandra xxx
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reply by the author on 28-Sep-2024
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I wish my mum would pop in for a while like Eleanor does with Jenna. I'm glad Matthew went with Jenna; I'm sure there is more to their relationship that neither realises yet. Now, what is Patti up to sneaking in the back door? I don't trust her. I was surprised to see another chapter already, keep them coming!! Another lovely chapter, and a lovely bit of romance in it too!! Well done, my clever friend. Love and hugs. Sandra xxx
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Comment Written 28-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2024
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I wish my Mom could do that too... Wouldn't that be awesome especially when things are feeling not that way you wish. When I worry I write...At times I feel I could turn a book out in a week if my eyes would hold up. LOL Thanks as always, Sandra. You are so good for me,
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Sally Law
Oh, I'm so glad I checked back into this. My life has been upended with a fractured foot. Now a hurricane. Good grief!
This is splendid and a romance brewing between Jenna and Detective Matthew Donnatelli. The visit by Patti seems scripted and well-timed. Eaitinu for the other shoe to drop.
Hopefully I won't miss any more of this great book.
Sending you my very best today as always.
Sal Xoxo
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reply by the author on 28-Sep-2024
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Oh, I'm so glad I checked back into this. My life has been upended with a fractured foot. Now a hurricane. Good grief!
This is splendid and a romance brewing between Jenna and Detective Matthew Donnatelli. The visit by Patti seems scripted and well-timed. Eaitinu for the other shoe to drop.
Hopefully I won't miss any more of this great book.
Sending you my very best today as always.
Sal Xoxo
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Comment Written 28-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2024
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Thanks for reading, Sally, but please take care of yourself. I hope the foot is mending and that you are safe from the hurricane. I think the budding romance will carry over into the next of the series... At least that's where my thoughts are leaning at the moment. Donatelli needs to lose that chip on his shoulder.
Smiles, Carol