Willing Hearts
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28 total reviews
Comment from Wendy G
Well written chapter. I still think Sami is too forward in probing about guns and babies after marriage when they've known each other less than a month. She isn't scaring Noah off, but many men would have run a mile. Nevertheless I am enjoying the story.
Wendy
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2024
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Well written chapter. I still think Sami is too forward in probing about guns and babies after marriage when they've known each other less than a month. She isn't scaring Noah off, but many men would have run a mile. Nevertheless I am enjoying the story.
Wendy
Comment Written 22-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2024
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Thank you for the kind review. I appreciate it. Sami is Sami, the reason for all the adjectives to describe her. LOL
Comment from Douglas Goff
Great chapter. That was a fun ending in this one.
Here is one of those rare moments that I get to help you.
Missing a word:
"I understand." Noah chuckled. "I'd hate to be our honeymoon and discover you won't allow guns in the house."
Great work, my friend.
Douglas
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2024
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Great chapter. That was a fun ending in this one.
Here is one of those rare moments that I get to help you.
Missing a word:
"I understand." Noah chuckled. "I'd hate to be our honeymoon and discover you won't allow guns in the house."
Great work, my friend.
Douglas
Comment Written 22-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2024
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Thank you for the kind review. I appreciate it. Added the missing word. Thank you for the catch.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hehe... this chapter was funny and romantic. I can imagine Noah working on Sami's cramp... lol
Great chapter. You never disappoint.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wouds inflicted by reason" -- Novali
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2024
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Hehe... this chapter was funny and romantic. I can imagine Noah working on Sami's cramp... lol
Great chapter. You never disappoint.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wouds inflicted by reason" -- Novali
Comment Written 22-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2024
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Thank you for the kind review. I appreciate it.
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
This is an interesting chapter as Noah and Sami's love is becoming a matter for chitchat. He doesn't seem to be particularly disturbed by the playboy again asking her to marry him. There are two problems: I didn't want to ask, (but) I didn't want to assume . . . . . . be (on) our honeymoon . . .
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2024
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This is an interesting chapter as Noah and Sami's love is becoming a matter for chitchat. He doesn't seem to be particularly disturbed by the playboy again asking her to marry him. There are two problems: I didn't want to ask, (but) I didn't want to assume . . . . . . be (on) our honeymoon . . .
Comment Written 22-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2024
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Thank you for the kind review. I appreciate it. I have fixed those area. Thank you for the catches.
Comment from BethShelby
This two seem crazy about each other but yet they keep mentioning if this relationship continues like there is some doubt. They don't always seem completely sure of each other.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2024
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This two seem crazy about each other but yet they keep mentioning if this relationship continues like there is some doubt. They don't always seem completely sure of each other.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2024
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Thank you for the kind review. I appreciate it.
Comment from BethShelby
This two seem crazy about each other but yet they keep mentioning if this relationship continues like there is some doubt. They don't always seem completely sure of each other.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2024
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This two seem crazy about each other but yet they keep mentioning if this relationship continues like there is some doubt. They don't always seem completely sure of each other.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2024
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Thank you for the kind review. I appreciate it.
Comment from royowen
I'm sure in my advanced thinking Sami and Noah will be married, and probably in yours too. But they will have work out their ground rules too, otherwise their relationship may end in divorce that's why. But they seem to be working them out, well done, Barbara, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2024
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I'm sure in my advanced thinking Sami and Noah will be married, and probably in yours too. But they will have work out their ground rules too, otherwise their relationship may end in divorce that's why. But they seem to be working them out, well done, Barbara, blessings Roy
Comment Written 22-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2024
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Thank you for the kind review. I appreciate it.
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Comment from jim vecchio
As usual, I loved your work! Reading it in installments, with time passing, everything is perfect. But, I'm wondering, in book format, or thinking in movie format, almost every installment speaks about eating or refers to dinner. (Not so much this one). In collected format, maybe you can vary the scenes or dialogue a bit more. I'm not complaining. I guess I'm hungry now
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2024
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As usual, I loved your work! Reading it in installments, with time passing, everything is perfect. But, I'm wondering, in book format, or thinking in movie format, almost every installment speaks about eating or refers to dinner. (Not so much this one). In collected format, maybe you can vary the scenes or dialogue a bit more. I'm not complaining. I guess I'm hungry now
Comment Written 22-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2024
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Thank you for the kind review. I appreciate it. I try to make my writing seems normal. People eat.
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I agree. It makes a lot of sense in this format. I was just thinking in movie terms, there would have to be some revision. But it's perfect now.
Comment from Teri7
I am so glad that I have six stars to give you for this great chapter. I wish these chapters never had to end and could keep on going. Maybe a second book would be great! I can always dream! love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2024
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I am so glad that I have six stars to give you for this great chapter. I wish these chapters never had to end and could keep on going. Maybe a second book would be great! I can always dream! love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 22-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2024
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Thank you for the kind review. I appreciate it.
Comment from judiverse
I think Sami's getting a bit ahead of herself. She's talking about marriage and children and Noah hasn't made his intentions clear. She's already made things complicated enough. I suppose we couldn't have a story without complications, though. The conversation with Mateo was handled well. Maybe when Chen is caught and Sami is no longer in protective custody, maybe she can think more clearly. Maybe she has a case of Stockholm syndrome, where prisoners become attached to their captors. Oh, I'd better stop with the analyzing. You know her better than I do. judi
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2024
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I think Sami's getting a bit ahead of herself. She's talking about marriage and children and Noah hasn't made his intentions clear. She's already made things complicated enough. I suppose we couldn't have a story without complications, though. The conversation with Mateo was handled well. Maybe when Chen is caught and Sami is no longer in protective custody, maybe she can think more clearly. Maybe she has a case of Stockholm syndrome, where prisoners become attached to their captors. Oh, I'd better stop with the analyzing. You know her better than I do. judi
Comment Written 22-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2024
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Thank you for the kind review. I appreciate it.
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You're welcome. For some reason, I've wanting to psychoanalyze and give advice. Maybe I should just let Sami and Noah work things out for themselves. judi
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It's all good. You're involved with my characters that's a good thing.