Yearning for Companionship
Senyru (glancing 'cross the room)12 total reviews
Comment from RodG
Mark, I like how you draw the reader into both the artwork and your poem. We feel the unrequited love the Speaker has for this young lady who is totally unaware of him. Nicely drawn with only seventeen syllables. Rod
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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2025
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Mark, I like how you draw the reader into both the artwork and your poem. We feel the unrequited love the Speaker has for this young lady who is totally unaware of him. Nicely drawn with only seventeen syllables. Rod
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Comment Written 20-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2025
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Thank Rod for your read on this poem. The guy may not have a chance with this woman (-(
Mark
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My pleasure.
Comment from jmdg1954
Yup, story of my life, looking at a girl and they do not look back at ya! Or look right through me.
Good poem entry. I enjoyed reading this.
Cheers my friend...
John
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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2025
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Yup, story of my life, looking at a girl and they do not look back at ya! Or look right through me.
Good poem entry. I enjoyed reading this.
Cheers my friend...
John
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Comment Written 20-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2025
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Thanks John for your review. Try not staring at them ! LOL
Mark
