Comment from Baltimore Born

Excellent

This is a very good poem. Your poem reads and flows well. I like the message in this poem. Good, consistent rhyming throughout the poem. Your last two lines closes the poem well. Nice job.

 Comment Written 20-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 21-Feb-2024

Thank you for your review and kind words. I really do appreciate it.

Comment from Alexandra Trovato

Excellent

This is an excellent poem! It is full of descriptive words and colorful imagery and authentic emotion. Your photo presentation supports your words well. Many readers will enjoy reviewing this as I did. Well done!

Best wishes,

Alex

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 Comment Written 20-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 20-Feb-2024

Thank you for your review I really do appreciate it.

Comment from Jodi Ann Anderson

Excellent

This is happy and beautiful. It also has a nice flow to it. It's nice to see poems like this, because they are an uplift start to the day. Just so you know, you might want to separate "strength" and "to". Great job! Thanks for posting this!

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 Comment Written 20-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 20-Feb-2024

Thank you for your review, I do appreciate it also thanks for letting me know I forgot to put a space between my words.