Willing Hearts
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Comment from Ridge Nash
I haven't had the pleasure of reading your other writings, but reading this makes me want to! I appreciate your writing style and use of words! Absolute nice job!
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2024
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I haven't had the pleasure of reading your other writings, but reading this makes me want to! I appreciate your writing style and use of words! Absolute nice job!
Comment Written 08-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2024
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Thank you for dropping by and leaving this kind review. I hope to see you again.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Wow, you are so good at writing romance novels. The scene with Sami and Noah were pretty steamy lol Sami is going to get hurt working the street. She's willing to go as far as necessary to save Myra.
I love it!
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2024
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Wow, you are so good at writing romance novels. The scene with Sami and Noah were pretty steamy lol Sami is going to get hurt working the street. She's willing to go as far as necessary to save Myra.
I love it!
Comment Written 08-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2024
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I doubt Noah will allow her to continually be on the street. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from T B Botts
Hello Barbara,
well, it looks like Sammi is going to get a first hand peek at what a prostitutes life is like. It seems like someone dropped the ball if Big T was able to lay hands on her. It will be interesting to see what tomorrow brings for her.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2024
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Hello Barbara,
well, it looks like Sammi is going to get a first hand peek at what a prostitutes life is like. It seems like someone dropped the ball if Big T was able to lay hands on her. It will be interesting to see what tomorrow brings for her.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
Comment Written 08-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2024
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Paul McFarland
I don't see how Sami is going to accomplish anything without being in danger. Noah has his work cut out for him, but he is probably enjoying the work.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2024
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I don't see how Sami is going to accomplish anything without being in danger. Noah has his work cut out for him, but he is probably enjoying the work.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2024
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Noah's take charge, whether Sami likes it or not. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Ric Myworld
They say we are supposed to write what we know, which I feel quite sure you don't know a lot of about this type of lifestyle. But you've picked up enough from somewhere to be convincing and make it sound like you know it well. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024
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They say we are supposed to write what we know, which I feel quite sure you don't know a lot of about this type of lifestyle. But you've picked up enough from somewhere to be convincing and make it sound like you know it well. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024
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Lol Thank you for the kind review. I did a lot of research which actually took years.
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The research is obvious, knowing you weren't there in the middle of the action. Great job!:-)
Comment from Sanku
Sami is truly a gret soul .her commitment to find the girls is praiseworthy. Noah is also smart ,but he went overboard a bit with his pretence..I wish the money could be snatched back..How horrible that the pimp is grabbing the poor girls money...
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024
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Sami is truly a gret soul .her commitment to find the girls is praiseworthy. Noah is also smart ,but he went overboard a bit with his pretence..I wish the money could be snatched back..How horrible that the pimp is grabbing the poor girls money...
Comment Written 08-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024
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Noah will do one more thing people won't like, but he does redeem himself. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Now, I get it. I am sorry I was slow on the uptake about this. You trusted yourself and told me to take a hike. I came back, and now I understand that I was right and at the same time oh so very very wrong. Color me embarrassed. Good work sweetie as always. Karen
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024
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Now, I get it. I am sorry I was slow on the uptake about this. You trusted yourself and told me to take a hike. I came back, and now I understand that I was right and at the same time oh so very very wrong. Color me embarrassed. Good work sweetie as always. Karen
Comment Written 08-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024
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Not a problem. Every had a right to their opinion. I would never stop a person. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from BethShelby
I surprised Noah put a lot of money down her blouse. He could have put dollars and it would look the same. If she new Homeland Security was trying to take care of the problem, wouldn't she feel she wasn't the only one who cared about the girls? It is very good story. I'm glad you writing it.
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024
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I surprised Noah put a lot of money down her blouse. He could have put dollars and it would look the same. If she new Homeland Security was trying to take care of the problem, wouldn't she feel she wasn't the only one who cared about the girls? It is very good story. I'm glad you writing it.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024
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She doesn't know who Noah works for. He believes she has information that she doesn't know she has. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Jacob1395
I could definitely feel Sami's determination to get to the bottom of what is happening, even if this does mean putting herself in danger. I definitely want to read on to find out what happens. Excellent writing Barbara.
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024
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I could definitely feel Sami's determination to get to the bottom of what is happening, even if this does mean putting herself in danger. I definitely want to read on to find out what happens. Excellent writing Barbara.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024
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Thank you for the kind reveiw.
Comment from Wendy G
Goodness, very dramatic. It would be very hard to infiltrate the prostitutes' circle, and she's putting herself into horrendous danger. It would be rare for a young woman on her ownto break through agan of traffickers. Well written.
Wendy
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024
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Goodness, very dramatic. It would be very hard to infiltrate the prostitutes' circle, and she's putting herself into horrendous danger. It would be rare for a young woman on her ownto break through agan of traffickers. Well written.
Wendy
Comment Written 08-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024
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Thank you for the kind review.