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This is book two of a trilogy book 1 "Ghost"

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Comment from barbara.wilkey
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The ending causes chills up my spine. I do understand, for a few years when I was too young to be married, I was married to an abuser. I was lucky I was able to get out. I did have to go into hiding for a while. He said he would hunt me down and kill me. I have now been married for 46 years to a wonderful man. This story needs to be told.

Most of our answers are within ourselves it's a matter of finding the path. (AMEN!!)

Then I aye a quick piece of chicken, (ate??)

 Comment Written 09-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 12-Dec-2023
    Thank you, Barbara, and when had fixed that little edit there. Amend to you too for sure. The answers are within we just gotta be brave enough to look at them. Thank you for your insight for your review and always for your wonderful comments. Have a great day!
Comment from JSD
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Oh my God. Lea. I just find myself despairing. I need release from the horror. How on earth did you survive all this? Well, actually, how wonderful you have come through all this and you are now such a free and talented individual. Much love to you. x

 Comment Written 09-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 11-Dec-2023
    I so appreciate your kind words I really do thank you. Honestly I don't know what it was. I always thought I was just afraid all the time. And I was running from fear and deal with. People I've not prepared for the outside world. I did a lot of stupid things. You made a lot of dumb mistakes made me who flawed human being but with a heart. Thank you my friend I hope you have an awesome day!
Comment from Jim Wile
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Oh, brother. That man is an absolute psycho along the lines of your stepfather. You certainly honed a sixth sense about dangerous situations, and now you're in one as well as Mrs. D. How are you both going to get out of this without getting killed by this sick man? And is all that chicken going to go to waste now?

(Sorry about that; I know this is no laughing matter.)

That's very encouraging that your sister got her information and that yours is being compiled and will be there soon. It sounds like there is an incredible amount. What is the endgame? What will you do with all that material when you've read it? Are you contemplating some sort of legal action? I hope that it ends up being all that you expect it to be. - Jim

 Comment Written 09-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 11-Dec-2023
    Yeah was choking chickens all over the place lol! I'm kidding too! I feel passed it off to the layer once I've gone I understand it will be a very large case and there's no statute of limitations on this stuff. I appreciate so much your review is always. I'm happy to see you here and always enjoy the things you have to say, and then you constructive suggestions you have thank you!
Comment from Jacob1395
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Another intense read Lea. I couldn't believe those final few lines. Reading it made me want to throw myself at Mr D and attack him. Now I'm really worried to find out what happens to Mrs D. A really well written piece.

 Comment Written 09-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 11-Dec-2023
    Thank you Jacob, thank you. I appreciate your reviews. I really do and happy to see your name come up You are simplicity with your insight creates magic so thank you very much!
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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Well, as predicted, that didn't take long! What a hateful man! His violence seems to be getting even more frequent. Mrs D knew it was coming too. And, as for poor you, Lea, you can't get away from it, even in your sleep. It's like it's invaded your brain and is now firmly embedded. Once again, the reader is immediately immersed into your world through another powerfully expressed write. There are some small edits throughout. The intro could do with a proofread but in the main body: "not so fast as to (miss) the glare of Mr D's eyes.."; "spidey?"; "de-(e)scalating"; "After a while of listening (tighten text).."; Then I a(t)e.."; You've left us with another cliff-hanger, Lea. Do you ever walk on level fields? Achingly sad! Debbie

 Comment Written 09-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 11-Dec-2023
    Hi Debbie! I went ahead and made all the edit suggestions and corrected the dialogue in some areas. Thank you very much for this. I appreciate it as you know. Appreciate everything you say and do I feel keep telling you that forever and ever! Thank you have a great night!
Comment from BethShelby
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I am wondering if the problems they are having has to do with her inviting you into the house. I hope not but I have a feeling if my mom had offered to let someone who had no where else to go to come and live in our house, my dad would have been throwing fits too. My dad wouldn't have been violent, but he would have been curseing mom out. My mom was like the Indian lady, and she always trying to help people. Dad was selfish and like visitors.

 Comment Written 09-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 09-Dec-2023
    I totally understand what you're saying. Do you remember the day when you realized your parents worked super heroes? Oh yeah but they were fallible what a bubble that burst! Thank you again my friend. I hope that you're having an awesome day. And I appreciate your review and you're fine As always you especially have an awesome day!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Oh my goodness Lea! How awful this is. You were knocked unconscious? Coming home from work to this turmoil with a gift of food and being met with this chaos is terrible Lea. These households full of violence seem to be following you around Lea. When will this cycle of hate stop? This is similar to what is happening in the world today with the continuing war, it just takes a band of like-minded mad men, and destruction follows.

I have come to realise that people like this who use violence on innocent weaker people, will never change. It is best to steer clear of such people and not let them enter your life. Once we know what someone is like, we have to protect ourselves and move on. You are in such danger living here with these people, I think it is time for you to move.

Another fine chapter Lea, love Dolly x x x



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 Comment Written 09-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 09-Dec-2023
    You are absolutely right once again and I get out quick for sure. Thank you again so much for your review and your kind words. Hope you are well!