The Design
Wanting to be someone else.36 total reviews
Comment from Ginda Simpson
What a lovely rhyming verse you have penned. And with such an important message. We all seem to know that we are unique, but we sometimes forget that we have been divinely designed and what could be better? Happy Thanksgiving.
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2023
What a lovely rhyming verse you have penned. And with such an important message. We all seem to know that we are unique, but we sometimes forget that we have been divinely designed and what could be better? Happy Thanksgiving.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2023
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Yes, Gina! We DO forget. And what could be better? Nothing, under Heaven. Your mind is in sync with my thoughts exactly!
Comment from Douglas Goff
I enjoyed the open straight forward message and what I perceived to be a backdoor 'God does not make mistakes' message. You really enhanced the power of the piece by backing it up with a bible verse in your author's notes.
Well done!
D
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2023
I enjoyed the open straight forward message and what I perceived to be a backdoor 'God does not make mistakes' message. You really enhanced the power of the piece by backing it up with a bible verse in your author's notes.
Well done!
D
Comment Written 22-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2023
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Thanks a bunch. I just wish more people were content. My insecurities drove this poem, but also the duscontent in the world. You got it.
Thanks for your thoughts on my poem:)
Tina
Comment from jake cosmos aller
your Christian faith shines through this poem illuminating your belief that we are all created by God for a purpose and that we are all his children. while I don't share that belief, I can appreciate this poem.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2023
your Christian faith shines through this poem illuminating your belief that we are all created by God for a purpose and that we are all his children. while I don't share that belief, I can appreciate this poem.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2023
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Thank you for reviewing my poem, even though you don't share my beliefs. That means a lot:)
Tina
Comment from Goodadvicechan
Although we say we are equal, this means equal in our civil rights and treatment under the law.
Each one if us is an individual with our own ideas, thoughts and life style.
I agree with what you said: " You're custom-made by God alone, to be uniquely you."
Thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2023
Although we say we are equal, this means equal in our civil rights and treatment under the law.
Each one if us is an individual with our own ideas, thoughts and life style.
I agree with what you said: " You're custom-made by God alone, to be uniquely you."
Thanks for sharing
Comment Written 21-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2023
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Unfortunately, our worlds law doesn't always treat people fairly or equally, I agree. Maybe that why I crave more of God who truly loves us all the same:)
Thank you, friend, for your thoughts.
Tina
Comment from Sally Law
Tina dear, this is so lovely and with a spiritual message inside. Trees represent mankind in the scriptures. I quite agree, God has made us all for His glory and honor. Sending you my best today as always and my very best wishes for the upcoming contest.
Sal XOs
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2023
Tina dear, this is so lovely and with a spiritual message inside. Trees represent mankind in the scriptures. I quite agree, God has made us all for His glory and honor. Sending you my best today as always and my very best wishes for the upcoming contest.
Sal XOs
Comment Written 21-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2023
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Thank you, sweet Sally. I always love to hear your thoughts, as you are so talented and wise...a great combo!
I need a good book to read. What do you suggest, which one of your books?
Tina
Comment from June Sargent
This is so true. We are all individuals who are precious in God's eyes. Like snowflakes, there are no two alike. That is the beauty of it all. And we should celebrate our uniqueness.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2023
This is so true. We are all individuals who are precious in God's eyes. Like snowflakes, there are no two alike. That is the beauty of it all. And we should celebrate our uniqueness.
Comment Written 20-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2023
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Amen! Well said, perhaps better than I did! Thank you for this review.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
This is lovely with a profound message of embracing our uniqueness and, although I've quoted it previously this evening, this quote by Oscar Wilde seems to apply to your skilfully conveyed theme:
"Be yourself. Everyone else is already taken."
Take care, Tina, and good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2023
This is lovely with a profound message of embracing our uniqueness and, although I've quoted it previously this evening, this quote by Oscar Wilde seems to apply to your skilfully conveyed theme:
"Be yourself. Everyone else is already taken."
Take care, Tina, and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 20-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2023
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Ooh! I love that quote! Thanks for the review!
Comment from Daylily
I love that you have based your excellent poem on Ephesians 2:10. Your concluding lines are stellar and are also an encouragement to anyone experiencing self-doubts.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2023
I love that you have based your excellent poem on Ephesians 2:10. Your concluding lines are stellar and are also an encouragement to anyone experiencing self-doubts.
Comment Written 20-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2023
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Thanks for your kind review:) No better encouragement than the Bible !
Comment from Paul McFarland
Really good job with the rhyme and meter, Tina. I like the comparison that you have made with the pine tree and oak tree. The last stanza really finishes things up well. I just read your poem again, and I'm changing my rating to six stars.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2023
Really good job with the rhyme and meter, Tina. I like the comparison that you have made with the pine tree and oak tree. The last stanza really finishes things up well. I just read your poem again, and I'm changing my rating to six stars.
Comment Written 20-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2023
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Thanks ever so much, Paul! I appreciate you reading and enjoying my poem:)
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Tina,
These abcb quatrains remind us that we are who we are meant to be. God made us this way and doubts should be put aside or prayed over.
Good luck in the contest
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a wonderful week.
Joan
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2023
Hi Tina,
These abcb quatrains remind us that we are who we are meant to be. God made us this way and doubts should be put aside or prayed over.
Good luck in the contest
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a wonderful week.
Joan
Comment Written 20-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2023
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Joan,
Thanks for your thoughts here in the review. No doubt , prayer is the answer to get answers and peace!
Tina
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You are most kindly welcome, Tina.
Joan