Dangerous Night Games
Who has the greater motive and plan?27 total reviews
Comment from karenina
Welcome stranger! So nice to see you posting again! This was a nail biter...the wrong man, but it seems he deserved it, just the same. You pack a wallop in 200 words!
Are you back to stay? Hope so!
Love ya,
Karenina
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2023
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Welcome stranger! So nice to see you posting again! This was a nail biter...the wrong man, but it seems he deserved it, just the same. You pack a wallop in 200 words!
Are you back to stay? Hope so!
Love ya,
Karenina
Comment Written 12-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2023
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My sweet Karenina.... I hope I have climbed to the top of the mountain and I have found my way back to writing. It was a short piece but it felt good to see it fill the page and then be accepted so highly by so many. My spirits soared! I missed you-though you were never far from my thoughts. Have an awesome day and thank you for the comments and review. Hugs, Carol
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You are a trooper, Carol. I know all of your fans and friends are as delighted to see you as I am! And now you've written a second "flash!" Yahoo! Keep it up. It's good for your soul to do what you enjoy!
Comment from Jasmine Girl
Welcome back. I don't think Tara should feel guilty about killing this man because he attacked her first. So he would rape or murder her if she didn't kill him first.
Well done and good luck.
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2023
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Welcome back. I don't think Tara should feel guilty about killing this man because he attacked her first. So he would rape or murder her if she didn't kill him first.
Well done and good luck.
Comment Written 11-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2023
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Thanks for your kindness. It's only a short but it's a beginning. I appreciate your comments. Smiles, Carol
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
I've been missing your writing. This is very well done. The ending is a bit of a shock until I thought about the fact that he was the same kind of animal who had killed her sister. He got what he deserved. You didn't waste a word getting a complete story into only 200 words.
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2023
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I've been missing your writing. This is very well done. The ending is a bit of a shock until I thought about the fact that he was the same kind of animal who had killed her sister. He got what he deserved. You didn't waste a word getting a complete story into only 200 words.
Comment Written 11-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2023
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Hello, Carol.... so nice to hear from you and thank you for commenting on my flash entry. It feels good to be back writing again even if its only baby steps. Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Wendy G
The suspense you have built up here is excellent - and what a twist at the end!! Brilliant. It is good to see you back. (I prayed for you just a few days ago, and I hope all is well. I like your new photo!) Best wishes for this very good entry in the contest.
Wendy
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2023
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The suspense you have built up here is excellent - and what a twist at the end!! Brilliant. It is good to see you back. (I prayed for you just a few days ago, and I hope all is well. I like your new photo!) Best wishes for this very good entry in the contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 11-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2023
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Oh what a blessing! First time back and golden stars and awesome praise are falling on my shoulders. I couldn't ask for more....and thankful for all your prayers. I definitely needed every one. Smiles and hugs to you, Carol
Comment from prettybluebirds
I haven't heard from you in quite some time. I'm not on here too much, either. I have been taking a proofreading course which doesn't leave much writing and reading time. Your short story is excellent, as usual. Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2023
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I haven't heard from you in quite some time. I'm not on here too much, either. I have been taking a proofreading course which doesn't leave much writing and reading time. Your short story is excellent, as usual. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 11-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2023
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Hello, my dear sweet friend. Been traveling a rough road and thought I might never write again. But here I am and feeling good about it. Thank you for using your precious time to read something of mine. Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Oh dear, a seriously bad mistake here and your flash fiction held my interest and it is a good entry for the contest, I wish you luck. A sad ending for this poor guy, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2023
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Oh dear, a seriously bad mistake here and your flash fiction held my interest and it is a good entry for the contest, I wish you luck. A sad ending for this poor guy, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 11-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2023
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Hello, Dolly...Thanks for stopping by to read this short flash and to leave some kind comments. Appreciate it very much. Smiles, Carol
Comment from Carol Clark2
Welcome back! This is a great flash fiction for the contest. Great suspense in your story.
You've been missed. I hope things are going well. Blessings. Carol
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2023
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Welcome back! This is a great flash fiction for the contest. Great suspense in your story.
You've been missed. I hope things are going well. Blessings. Carol
Comment Written 11-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2023
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Thank you for your kindness and for taking the time to read my first effort. Flash fictions are difficult to get the whole story so I am glad you enjoyed. Smiles, Carol
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Yes, I agree about flash fiction being difficult to write well. Yours is great! Have a blessed weekend. Carol
Comment from Loretta Bigg
Ha, I like it. Two very nice twists round out the ending and there is enough character development for such a short story to make it possible to "see" what is happening. You might as well take this little gem and lengthen it as I could even see a short novel coming out of this.
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2023
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Ha, I like it. Two very nice twists round out the ending and there is enough character development for such a short story to make it possible to "see" what is happening. You might as well take this little gem and lengthen it as I could even see a short novel coming out of this.
Comment Written 11-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2023
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Blessings falling all around me with your kind words and gold stars! Thank you so much. I appreciate it very much. Yes, I can see a possible novel growing from this one too. Smiles, Carol
Comment from lyenochka
Carol, you're back!! And our premier suspense storytelling has gifted us with another intriguing situation. You know just how much to withhold from the reader to keep things surprising. Despite the violence, I couldn't help but chuckle a little at Tara's nonchalance as she returns to her goal of avenging her sister. We don't feel as bad for the guy she killed as it was clear he was out to kill her.
Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2023
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Carol, you're back!! And our premier suspense storytelling has gifted us with another intriguing situation. You know just how much to withhold from the reader to keep things surprising. Despite the violence, I couldn't help but chuckle a little at Tara's nonchalance as she returns to her goal of avenging her sister. We don't feel as bad for the guy she killed as it was clear he was out to kill her.
Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 11-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2023
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Hello, my dear Helen. It's been a rocky road and I haven't cleared all the obstacles yet, but it feels good to be back. I definitely missed writing and all my dear friends and their support. Thank you for always being there and for adding such a glowing sparkle to my return. Love ya, Carol
Comment from royowen
Well I guess he deserved it anyway, I loved this Carol, (it's so good to see you again dear girl, this is a great story, I like the gaping hole in his chest, I think he didn't expect this, beautifully written dear girl, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2023
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Well I guess he deserved it anyway, I loved this Carol, (it's so good to see you again dear girl, this is a great story, I like the gaping hole in his chest, I think he didn't expect this, beautifully written dear girl, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 11-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2023
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Good morning, Roy.... I feel blessed that you and so many others have welcomed me back so warmly. I wasn't sure I would ever write again and now I feel humbled by the path I've followed to get here. Thank you so much for your kindness and review. Smiles, Carol
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Well believe me Carol, you are forgotten, you have been and are a tremendous blessings, praise God for you.