The Miranda Chronicles
Viewing comments for Chapter 38 "Not So Happy (Miranda)"Miranda solves a mystery.
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Comment from Jay Squires
It appears that Missy is playing mind games with Miranda again. That would be enough to scare the bejesus out of anyone, except Miranda. I'm wondering why Dougie bothered to call Waylon and tell him he'd be by tomorrow. It does lay the groundwork for using Waylon as a pawn in his money gathering scheme. If he knows how much Miranda wants Whalon there Dougie wouldn't hesitate to use his son as leverege. We'll see about that! Gretchen wouldn't do that to us. Great chapter, Gretchen!
Jay
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2022
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It appears that Missy is playing mind games with Miranda again. That would be enough to scare the bejesus out of anyone, except Miranda. I'm wondering why Dougie bothered to call Waylon and tell him he'd be by tomorrow. It does lay the groundwork for using Waylon as a pawn in his money gathering scheme. If he knows how much Miranda wants Whalon there Dougie wouldn't hesitate to use his son as leverege. We'll see about that! Gretchen wouldn't do that to us. Great chapter, Gretchen!
Jay
Comment Written 27-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2022
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Thank you, Jay. I appreciate your take on this. Dougie ain't gonna give up yet. Appreciate the extra star. Gretchen
Comment from nancy_e_davis
Good for her! Like I said before I like Miranda. Dougie is not worth her time. She has his number now and his kid who she is growing fond of. Waylon is fond of her as well so she will be the mother figure he needs and Dougie is free to do whatever. She's lucky she's rid of the jerk. Nancy:)
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2022
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Good for her! Like I said before I like Miranda. Dougie is not worth her time. She has his number now and his kid who she is growing fond of. Waylon is fond of her as well so she will be the mother figure he needs and Dougie is free to do whatever. She's lucky she's rid of the jerk. Nancy:)
Comment Written 27-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2022
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He'd not giving up so easily. Lol. He's a con man. Thank you so much for the awesome review. And the stars. Gretchen
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No, a con man never will until he finds someone else to con!
Comment from Wendy G
That Dougie is really something! Glad she stood up to him. Hoping he won't take Waylon away. And the dead flowers? Wondering if Missy has anything to do with that? Not that you'll let on just yet! Miranda is strong, I like her gutsy character.
Wendy
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2022
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That Dougie is really something! Glad she stood up to him. Hoping he won't take Waylon away. And the dead flowers? Wondering if Missy has anything to do with that? Not that you'll let on just yet! Miranda is strong, I like her gutsy character.
Wendy
Comment Written 27-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2022
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Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying this story. Gretchen
Comment from Earl Corp
Since this is part of a larger work it might help if you put a cast of characters in your author's notes. It doesn't bother me but some reviewers might ding you because you don't have a language warning on this. Good luck.
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2022
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Since this is part of a larger work it might help if you put a cast of characters in your author's notes. It doesn't bother me but some reviewers might ding you because you don't have a language warning on this. Good luck.
Comment Written 27-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2022
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I probably should do the language warning. Thanks for reminding me. Thank you for this great review. Gretchen
Comment from Jim Wile
This is well-written with good dialog and pace. You instantly arouse sympathy with Miranda and enmity towards Dougie. it's nice to see Miranda not falling for Dougie's tricks again and seeing him for what he is.
Very good job.
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reply by the author on 27-Dec-2022
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This is well-written with good dialog and pace. You instantly arouse sympathy with Miranda and enmity towards Dougie. it's nice to see Miranda not falling for Dougie's tricks again and seeing him for what he is.
Very good job.
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Comment Written 27-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2022
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Thank you so much for this nice review. Gretchen
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Ahh, Miranda! Such serious growth! It's so easy to cheer for her...and for Waylon, too. But those dead flowers? NOT comforting! That's for sure. But Miranda will be able to handle whatever happens!
Nicely done, Gretchen!
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reply by the author on 27-Dec-2022
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Ahh, Miranda! Such serious growth! It's so easy to cheer for her...and for Waylon, too. But those dead flowers? NOT comforting! That's for sure. But Miranda will be able to handle whatever happens!
Nicely done, Gretchen!
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Comment Written 27-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2022
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Thank you, Rachelle. I appreciate your nice review. Dead cemetery flowers are not a good thing. Gretchen
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Nope. Not ever, really...
