The Miranda Chronicles
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "Dumped and Fired part 1"Miranda solves a mystery.
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Comment from royowen
I can remember guys like this from my teens, they were too cool for sport, so they didn't compete, so physically the deteriorated as they aged, they smoked, drank, and the girls loved them, but by thirty their hotness was dissipated along with their physique, beautifully written Gretchen, great job, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2022
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I can remember guys like this from my teens, they were too cool for sport, so they didn't compete, so physically the deteriorated as they aged, they smoked, drank, and the girls loved them, but by thirty their hotness was dissipated along with their physique, beautifully written Gretchen, great job, blessings Roy
Comment Written 03-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2022
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Thank you for the wonderful review. Gretchen
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A pleasure Gretchen
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Woman, this is absolutely fantastic!! I was 100 "in" by the end of the first sentence. I especially loved "the The Eagle gas and go where I got to work 40 to 500 hours a week." That was great. I also really liked, "He was wrong in all the right ways." Ohhhh yeah! Who doesn't know THIS man!! Can't wait for Part 2!
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reply by the author on 03-Sep-2022
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Woman, this is absolutely fantastic!! I was 100 "in" by the end of the first sentence. I especially loved "the The Eagle gas and go where I got to work 40 to 500 hours a week." That was great. I also really liked, "He was wrong in all the right ways." Ohhhh yeah! Who doesn't know THIS man!! Can't wait for Part 2!
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Comment Written 03-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2022
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Thank you. Hoping to post part 2 tomorrow. Thank you for your hilarious review. Gretchen
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I never figured out why good girls fall for bad boys, but we all did it. I enjoyed reading and can't wait for more.
And I'll be the first to agree with those that called me an idiot. (those WHO called)
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reply by the author on 03-Sep-2022
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I never figured out why good girls fall for bad boys, but we all did it. I enjoyed reading and can't wait for more.
And I'll be the first to agree with those that called me an idiot. (those WHO called)
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Comment Written 03-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2022
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Thank you. I'm correcting it now.
Gretchen
