Leander
poem204 total reviews
Comment from Justin Filina
Very tongue-in-cheek humor throughout this poem. I love the picture of Sawyer, and the creative descriptions of what he steals.
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Very tongue-in-cheek humor throughout this poem. I love the picture of Sawyer, and the creative descriptions of what he steals.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2013
Comment from Norbanus
An evil eye, without a try
That leander boy has displays it
but it's my guess that there's a yes
and nothing much delays it.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2013
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An evil eye, without a try
That leander boy has displays it
but it's my guess that there's a yes
and nothing much delays it.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2013
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Norbanus, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from chasennov
'Leander.' Leander must have been a little busy man, taking away all of those things. A very nice poem you have created here, Brooke. Well done.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2013
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'Leander.' Leander must have been a little busy man, taking away all of those things. A very nice poem you have created here, Brooke. Well done.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2013
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Thank you so much, chasennov :-) Brooke
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You're most welcome, Brooke.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
You have really captured the look on Sawyers face with this story in a poem, Brooke. LOL, you really have to smile at him. Your story is brilliant and I am sure he will appreciate it when he is older, probably have a real chuckle. Good luck in the contest, Brooke, the story, rhyme and rhythm are perfect. xsx Sandra
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2013
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You have really captured the look on Sawyers face with this story in a poem, Brooke. LOL, you really have to smile at him. Your story is brilliant and I am sure he will appreciate it when he is older, probably have a real chuckle. Good luck in the contest, Brooke, the story, rhyme and rhythm are perfect. xsx Sandra
Comment Written 15-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2013
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Sandra, thank you so very much, my friend :-) So glad this one entertained you. I appreciate your generous sixth star :-) Brooke
Comment from onkughosh19
A wonderful write on Leander ...a naughty little boy.His adventures and misadventures are all recorded most beautifully here. The first para is interesting "Leander was an evil boy/And had the eye to prove it/His body once contained a heart/ But someone had removed it.
He stole honey from the bees, scent from flowers and water from clouds.He even looted robin's eggs and stole the silver from the stars and....'
An excellent job.Highly recommended.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2013
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A wonderful write on Leander ...a naughty little boy.His adventures and misadventures are all recorded most beautifully here. The first para is interesting "Leander was an evil boy/And had the eye to prove it/His body once contained a heart/ But someone had removed it.
He stole honey from the bees, scent from flowers and water from clouds.He even looted robin's eggs and stole the silver from the stars and....'
An excellent job.Highly recommended.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2013
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onkughosh, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Wow this is a wonderful piece for adults and children alike. I just love it. The tickles, the butterflys, the honey...
The sour from the pickles...now okay for that. :)
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2013
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Wow this is a wonderful piece for adults and children alike. I just love it. The tickles, the butterflys, the honey...
The sour from the pickles...now okay for that. :)
Comment Written 15-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2013
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Barb, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
Comment from Liz Dunbee
I think we met Leander before. What a dreadful little boy! I agree with his mom. Stealing the starlight is the limit.
This is fun to read and made me smile. Well done on an interesting and amusing poem. Good Luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2013
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I think we met Leander before. What a dreadful little boy! I agree with his mom. Stealing the starlight is the limit.
This is fun to read and made me smile. Well done on an interesting and amusing poem. Good Luck in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2013
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Liz, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
Comment from Andyw
Loved this. Quirky and funny with a rhyme that's easy to follow and flows so very well.
Great picture too to compliment it!
Thanks for sharing.
Andy
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2013
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Loved this. Quirky and funny with a rhyme that's easy to follow and flows so very well.
Great picture too to compliment it!
Thanks for sharing.
Andy
Comment Written 15-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2013
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Andy, thanks so much :-) Brooke
Comment from jadapenn
Methinks they're raising many Leanders nowadays. The kiddies are so insolent. Loved this poem relaying all the evil Lee got up to. But more, I absolutely loved the expression on the cute face. He's up to no good, that's for sure. Well written and best wishes for the contest. Luv jada
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2013
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Methinks they're raising many Leanders nowadays. The kiddies are so insolent. Loved this poem relaying all the evil Lee got up to. But more, I absolutely loved the expression on the cute face. He's up to no good, that's for sure. Well written and best wishes for the contest. Luv jada
Comment Written 15-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2013
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Thanks so much, Jada. He's been tossing his food, even the kinds he likes, and Mommy thinks he's naughty! LOL Brooke
Comment from Clockwise
Have to give six where six is due. I just hope Leander doesn't steal them from you. Fun and entertaing. Loved it! Thank you so much for consistently elevating the quality of the writing here.
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2013
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Have to give six where six is due. I just hope Leander doesn't steal them from you. Fun and entertaing. Loved it! Thank you so much for consistently elevating the quality of the writing here.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2013
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Clockwise, thank you for the laugh, the review, and the generous sixth star :-) Brooke