Comment from Twomoon

Excellent

Mrs. KT, this was beautiful, structure, unique, and quite incredible in your creative flow and message..loved the whole of this lovely poem..your words from the heart..deep, somewhat feelings of depression it seemed..smile..but on to the new year..lovely work..much love twomoon

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2008

Comment from Beejay

Excellent

What a splendid piece of work. Something we can all think about at the beginning of this new year. I really enjoyed reading it, and a happy new year to you

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2008

Comment from ledford

Excellent

Great job:-) I really liked this.

I loved these lines...
"Words - betrayed
Paths - encumbered
Hopes - dashed"

"Most reverently pray
To God Almighty
That I am not a fool. . . "

Keep up the good work!

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2008

Comment from EllenV

Excellent

As I began reading this poem I was surprised to read something so depressing from you. And then I came to the lines:

Only a fool would stay
Imprisoned by the past

Love the last few lines, especially.

Enjoyed the read,
Ellen

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2008

Comment from Bryana

Excellent

Wow! I love your poem specially the ending...

I bid the New Year
"Welcome,"
And on bended knees,
Most reverently pray
To God Almighty
That I am not a fool...

I'm sure you are not a fool, if you were
you would not be writing this poem.

Funny, I just wrote a poem about my thoughts for the new year as well.

Happy New Year!

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2008

Comment from mmichelle97219

Excellent

You can take a look back and say okay we will do better this year. That I think is the ultimate amd most important resolution. Well done.
Michelle

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 Comment Written 07-Jan-2008