A Picture's Worth a Thousand Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 14 "~Waiting with Open Graves~"A compilation of pictapoems from my portfolio
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Comment from The Death
This is amazing!
You are a master of these type of writes and you are keeping up the halloween spirit.
You have presented in a stunning manner and phrasing is evocative.
Great work!
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2013
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This is amazing!
You are a master of these type of writes and you are keeping up the halloween spirit.
You have presented in a stunning manner and phrasing is evocative.
Great work!
Comment Written 22-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2013
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Thank you very much for your wonderful review, Anupam Sharma. I truly appreciate it!
Comment from wiljacro
HI! Dutch. This is definitely not a bedtime read, you had the hair on my neck stood rigid on end, and if that was not enough, I then read your notes, and came across even more grisly storys. This work is really, really, the sort of thing that, if read around a camp-fire, would have everyone sat up until dawn,afraid to close their eyes and is exactly right for a Halloween all night party! GREAT STUFF! wiljacro.
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2013
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HI! Dutch. This is definitely not a bedtime read, you had the hair on my neck stood rigid on end, and if that was not enough, I then read your notes, and came across even more grisly storys. This work is really, really, the sort of thing that, if read around a camp-fire, would have everyone sat up until dawn,afraid to close their eyes and is exactly right for a Halloween all night party! GREAT STUFF! wiljacro.
Comment Written 22-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2013
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Hah, thanks for that great compliment, wiljarco. There is no better praise for a writer of dark fiction and poetry than to have one of his readers tell him (or her) that it made their hair stand on end...
You've made my day!
Comment from JM daSilva
I gotta say when I worked at the university morgue, I wouldn't put it past some guys enjoying some dead beauties, maybe that's why some disappeared.
One suggestion
Myrtle's corpse
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2013
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I gotta say when I worked at the university morgue, I wouldn't put it past some guys enjoying some dead beauties, maybe that's why some disappeared.
One suggestion
Myrtle's corpse
Comment Written 22-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2013
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Oh-h-h-h, that would be so nasty, JM! But, I have met a few folks myself whom I wouldn't put it past, either, LOL...
Thanks for the review, and for pointing out that darn missed apostrophe!
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Great pleasure. Btw, my son invented a new platform for authors, it's been working wonders in Brazil. I intend to launch it for us.Blogs have a problem, I'll show you a better way later.
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Good deal. I've been wondering, are there more chapters, new ones, of Transhumans? I'm not getting any more notifications on the story...
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Yeah. Why aren't you getting notification?
I don't understand this.I'm releasing one a day because I want to release the this book before December and I'll do it.
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I'll have to go back and read the one's I have missed. I'll try to get them all in today and tonight...
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No hurry.
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Oh, I know that. But, I need my Iacamiaba, Apoema, and Vincent fix, LOL...
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lol. Thanks. I think you've missed some crazy stuff. lol.
Comment from robina1978
Thanks for your elaborate foot note, which made things more clear. It is a scary one indeed and written in a nice form,which name I forgot.
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reply by the author on 22-Oct-2013
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Thanks for your elaborate foot note, which made things more clear. It is a scary one indeed and written in a nice form,which name I forgot.
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Comment Written 22-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2013
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Thanks, robina1978, I appreciate your giving me a look-see on this one.
It's called a 'pictapoem' a combination of audio book, graphic novel, and poetic prose.
Comment from Twilightspire
Man, perfectly diabolical. I loved the author notes on this one. I've been to Bachelor's Grove about a zillion times, it's right down the street from me and it is a haunting, eerie place.
The writing on this was an excellent blend of ironic and justice. The image and the music went along with it perfectly! It doesn't pay to be a creepy, necrophiliac gravedigger. Lol.
-T.J.
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2013
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Man, perfectly diabolical. I loved the author notes on this one. I've been to Bachelor's Grove about a zillion times, it's right down the street from me and it is a haunting, eerie place.
The writing on this was an excellent blend of ironic and justice. The image and the music went along with it perfectly! It doesn't pay to be a creepy, necrophiliac gravedigger. Lol.
-T.J.
Comment Written 22-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2013
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Thanks, TJ, I really appreciate you giving me feed back on this one. I was a bit timid about posting it (obviously because of the subject matter), but so far, the one's who've read it comprehend it's about an old legend. You can't change a legend, right?
Thanks so much again, my friend!
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I like how you did. Hinted, but never actually came across and said it. No need to be timid, it was perfect.
Hmmm. Can you change a legend? Nah. We aren't that good...are we? Heh heh.
Comment from ravenblack
A fitting end for the necrophiliac grave digger. Like the antique feel, your whilst' s , thee' s and thou' s flowing like you use them every day. Really gives this one the feel of being a tale passed down for generations. I was at Bachelor's grove once. Very creepy.
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reply by the author on 22-Oct-2013
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A fitting end for the necrophiliac grave digger. Like the antique feel, your whilst' s , thee' s and thou' s flowing like you use them every day. Really gives this one the feel of being a tale passed down for generations. I was at Bachelor's grove once. Very creepy.
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Comment Written 22-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2013
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Yeah, right? That place even gives me the heebie~jeebies!
Thanks for being my first review of the day (Hell, it may be my last...who knows, LOL?) and for making it a great one, ravenblack. Much appreciated!