Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)

Excellent

This is the first time I have met this kind of poem. It is obviously extremely complex and demanding of the author. You have done a good job, as the message of strong love shows through clearly.
It is lines like
-Show kindness and don't cause each other stress
-Adore with passion and finesse
that are the key ones I feel

 Comment Written 26-Dec-2019

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reply by the author on 26-Dec-2019

Thanks for your read and your kind comments.

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

I think this is a good entry for the Share A Diatelle Poem writing prompt.
Your verse is well rhymed, well written, and describes love very nicely.
Well done and I wish you luck with the contest.
Sharon

 Comment Written 26-Dec-2019

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reply by the author on 26-Dec-2019

Thanks for your read and your kind comments.

Comment from papa55mike

Excellent

Wow! What a prompt and form to write. This poem is wonderfully written and I love the picture.

Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike

 Comment Written 26-Dec-2019

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reply by the author on 26-Dec-2019

Thanks for your read and your kind comments. Thanks for the blessing.