Those Were The Days
rhymed poem8 total reviews
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the Childhood contest.
You tell us of a little girl. The artwork is lovely and the video brings back old memories.
Well done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2019
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I think this is a good entry for the Childhood contest.
You tell us of a little girl. The artwork is lovely and the video brings back old memories.
Well done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 14-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2019
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Hi! The little girl, or star, is me. Thank you. Hearts & hugs :)
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written rhyming poem about an unforgettable childhood experience with living parents who truly care for their children and teach them good manners and how to love other humans.
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2019
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A very well-written rhyming poem about an unforgettable childhood experience with living parents who truly care for their children and teach them good manners and how to love other humans.
Comment Written 13-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2019
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Hi! Thank you :)
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
It was childhood when the child, lady of today, enjoyed each moment of a day in joy and laughter and eating the favourite and enjoying mother's read; well said, well done.
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2019
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It was childhood when the child, lady of today, enjoyed each moment of a day in joy and laughter and eating the favourite and enjoying mother's read; well said, well done.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2019
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Hi! Thank you :)
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Your poem is so beautiful. Those glittering birds are quite stunning. The days of childhood will be remembered always by the child himself/herself. Were you like a tomboy?
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2019
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Your poem is so beautiful. Those glittering birds are quite stunning. The days of childhood will be remembered always by the child himself/herself. Were you like a tomboy?
Comment Written 12-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2019
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Hi Rosemary! I have always been very feminine and lived around plenty boys. I could do anything like Lynda Carter or Jacqueline Smith... If that's a tomboy... Well, so be it. Thank you :)
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Feminine and like Lynda Carter and Jacqueline Smith. Wow!
Comment from Y. M. Roger
A delightful offering of memories in quatrains of aabb format that not only paint a picture of visions but of emotions... loved the video at the end!! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2019
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A delightful offering of memories in quatrains of aabb format that not only paint a picture of visions but of emotions... loved the video at the end!! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
Comment Written 12-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2019
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Hi Y.M.! You're very kind. Thank you :)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Your childhood sounds fantastic, full of everyone running around after you, I enjoyed your glitter presentation, very pleasing indeed and Christmassy too, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2019
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Your childhood sounds fantastic, full of everyone running around after you, I enjoyed your glitter presentation, very pleasing indeed and Christmassy too, love Dolly x
Comment Written 12-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2019
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Hi Dolly! You're nice. Thank you. Hearts & hugs, Alicia :)
Comment from Bill Pinder
I remember a lot of those things that were common in the 70s. Thanks for sharing this creative writing about your childhood memories. Keep pressing on and making new memories.
Bill
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2019
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I remember a lot of those things that were common in the 70s. Thanks for sharing this creative writing about your childhood memories. Keep pressing on and making new memories.
Bill
Comment Written 12-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2019
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Hi Bill! You're nice. Thank you. Hearts & hugs, Alicia :)
Comment from Pam (respa)
-This is a very good
entry for many reasons.
-I love the artwork, and
the presentation is good.
-I enjoyed the notes, and
even though I am a bit older,
I enjoyed some of the shows
you mentioned and shared-
"All in the Family" is a classic!
-A well written poem that
has good rhyme and
imagery that all creates
a smooth flow to your poem.
-You sound like a very
happy person who enjoyed
your childhood.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2019
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-This is a very good
entry for many reasons.
-I love the artwork, and
the presentation is good.
-I enjoyed the notes, and
even though I am a bit older,
I enjoyed some of the shows
you mentioned and shared-
"All in the Family" is a classic!
-A well written poem that
has good rhyme and
imagery that all creates
a smooth flow to your poem.
-You sound like a very
happy person who enjoyed
your childhood.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2019
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Hi Pam! I was naturally a popular wacko, but fairly normal these days. You're nice. Thank you. Hearts & hugs, Alicia
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Glad to hear there was a change to "fairly normal." You are welcome for the review, and thank you for the reply.