This Time - That Time 3
Viewing comments for Chapter 20 "James' Discovery!"Third book in the time travel trilogy
28 total reviews
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Ohhhhhhh!!! NOW I'm catching on!! And I'm excited that that nasty man is about to get his come-uppance!!! Just like you promised when you said that your readers liked his fate!! Wooot!! I've been hoping this was on the horizon!! (Math headache has now been vanquished, I'm happy to report!) xo
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2019
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Ohhhhhhh!!! NOW I'm catching on!! And I'm excited that that nasty man is about to get his come-uppance!!! Just like you promised when you said that your readers liked his fate!! Wooot!! I've been hoping this was on the horizon!! (Math headache has now been vanquished, I'm happy to report!) xo
Comment Written 26-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2019
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I'm so pleased your math headache has gone now. Did you know we call it maths, with the 's'? Just a little tidbit to file away in your foreign file. :)) Yes, Charles won't get away with all the nasty things he's done to Gladys. I'm so pleased you are still enjoying my book. You're just a wonderful friend. I tried to give you another thumbs up but I can't yet as I've already given you one for this month. :( Soon! xxxxx
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Yes! I did know that because of some books I've read with British characters. It's hard enough singular! It should NOT be plural!
Comment from l.raven
Hi Sandra, I am so glad I always go back to make sure I didn't miss anything...I don't know how I missed this chapter...but I think that is when John had surgery....and this is one of the most important ones...OMG...a good thing James stepped up...Veronica was making my blood pressure rise...so why Mildred ???? my sweet friend...and who????...and what were the change of plans???...I hate it when you do this...your really not good at leaving hints...you know like Columbo...now I have to run and read the other chapter sweet girl...this was one of your best chapters...not that I didn't love them all wonderful you...you much be up typing night and day...does Graham still know who you are???...LOL...LOL...well done you...love your story told...love you soooo muches...Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2019
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Hi Sandra, I am so glad I always go back to make sure I didn't miss anything...I don't know how I missed this chapter...but I think that is when John had surgery....and this is one of the most important ones...OMG...a good thing James stepped up...Veronica was making my blood pressure rise...so why Mildred ???? my sweet friend...and who????...and what were the change of plans???...I hate it when you do this...your really not good at leaving hints...you know like Columbo...now I have to run and read the other chapter sweet girl...this was one of your best chapters...not that I didn't love them all wonderful you...you much be up typing night and day...does Graham still know who you are???...LOL...LOL...well done you...love your story told...love you soooo muches...Linda xxoo
Comment Written 02-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2019
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Oh, yes, I'm glad you didn't miss this one, you would have wondered what on earth was going on had you gone to the next part without this one. Now, I don't remember Columbo leaving hints, you knew he had sussed something out, but he played his cards close to his chest. I used to love how he would get to the door, and then turn around as if he had forgotten something, lol, that always caught them out.
I asked Graham if he knew who I was, he said he thought I was an attachment to the table!!! LOL You are both cheeky!! But, you're right, I am going to ease off when this book is finished. I plan on writing more books for Eric and taking my time over them. And, I'm going to write some poetry too. I haven't written any in a long while.
Did you get to the next part? I want to know what you think of it. :)) I'm so pleased John is improving and the hole has been sorted. Bless him, he had an angel at his side all the time, you are amazing. Love you lots, my wonderful friend. :)) Sandra xxxx
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Hi You, LOL...see you are just like Columbo...you get right to the ending...you open the door...you wave to us...and you turn away without a hint...sigh...you just have to love man(Graham)...LOL...I am so glad you are writing other books for Eric...I can hardly wait....how did he like his gift ????...wish I could have seen his face...you are an angel sweet girl...what you are doing to help Eric is amazing...think of when he has kids...and he shows them published books about him...when by their great grandmother...it doesn't get better than that...soooooo welcome you little chip of oak...the corner of the table...LOL...love you muchhhhhhh my sweetest friend...Linda xxoo
Hi to Ian for me...xxoo
Comment from tfawcus
Wow, this is a humdinger of a chapter - so many things coming together. I like the idea of the joint investigation between James and Veronica. A fresh pair of eyes sometimes makes all the difference. The dialogue between them is wonderfully natural. A combination of internet search and old letters seems to have turned up trumps. Different approaches by the different generations.
I think that I must have missed the last chapter, so will have to go back and read it to get up to speed.
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2018
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Wow, this is a humdinger of a chapter - so many things coming together. I like the idea of the joint investigation between James and Veronica. A fresh pair of eyes sometimes makes all the difference. The dialogue between them is wonderfully natural. A combination of internet search and old letters seems to have turned up trumps. Different approaches by the different generations.
I think that I must have missed the last chapter, so will have to go back and read it to get up to speed.
Comment Written 20-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2018
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Thank you so very much for the lovely 6 stars, my friend, and for the fabulous review. Veronica always trusts in her husband, he's quite the detective! lol. Have a wonderful Christmas,Tony, and a fabulous 2019. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment from rspoet
Hello Sandra,
Another excellent thread in the tangled web of the past.
My, my. Now you are really getting heavy. Mildred has to kill somebody.
Perhaps the same objective can be achieved with a lesser action.
Killing Pembrock (or whoever the target is) could have dire unintended consequences,
unless history already recorded his death at that time.
Time is quite complicated.
I wonder if the Powers that Be celebrate Christmas.
Robert
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2018
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Hello Sandra,
Another excellent thread in the tangled web of the past.
My, my. Now you are really getting heavy. Mildred has to kill somebody.
Perhaps the same objective can be achieved with a lesser action.
Killing Pembrock (or whoever the target is) could have dire unintended consequences,
unless history already recorded his death at that time.
Time is quite complicated.
I wonder if the Powers that Be celebrate Christmas.
Robert
Comment Written 19-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2018
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Thank you for another wonderful review, Robert, and a humongous hug for the lovely stars. Do the Powers celebrate Christmas, now, that is something I don't know. I'll have to ask Mildred, she might know! lol. Have a wonderful Christmas my friend. Big hugs. Sandra xxxx
Comment from Pam (respa)
-A good chapter that flows very well
from beginning to end, Sandra.
-James is very involved in trying to
help Ver. figure out the historical
aspect of Mildred's situation.
-An excellent job of mixing historical
fact with the character's reactions.
-The mention of the hospital where Mildred
had been working piques James's interest.
-He figures that whatever she is doing, it
doesn't bode well for her the way things are now.
-Having James ask Ver. about his grandfather's
letters is a good way to introduce the
topic for the end of the chapter.
-You did an excellent job of showing
James's emotion as he read the letter,
and also providing the content of it.
-You definitely leave us with
a big cliffhanger at the end!
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2018
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-A good chapter that flows very well
from beginning to end, Sandra.
-James is very involved in trying to
help Ver. figure out the historical
aspect of Mildred's situation.
-An excellent job of mixing historical
fact with the character's reactions.
-The mention of the hospital where Mildred
had been working piques James's interest.
-He figures that whatever she is doing, it
doesn't bode well for her the way things are now.
-Having James ask Ver. about his grandfather's
letters is a good way to introduce the
topic for the end of the chapter.
-You did an excellent job of showing
James's emotion as he read the letter,
and also providing the content of it.
-You definitely leave us with
a big cliffhanger at the end!
Comment Written 19-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2018
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Aw, bless your heart, Pam, thank you so very much for the six stars and the wonderful review. Your support has been amazing, my friend, I've really appreciated you, more than I can say. More big hugs, and much love! :)) Sandra xxx
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You are very welcome and deserving, Sandra. Big hugs and love back to you, my friend.
Comment from giraffmang
Well, that really would be a turn-up for the books. Awesome addition.
but the raid went on for hours, and not only did it kill and injure hundreds of people, it devastated the city. - need closing speech marks here.
that family we talked about so often--" - the closing speech marks here have become inverted.
Best place tom stop ever....
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2018
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Well, that really would be a turn-up for the books. Awesome addition.
but the raid went on for hours, and not only did it kill and injure hundreds of people, it devastated the city. - need closing speech marks here.
that family we talked about so often--" - the closing speech marks here have become inverted.
Best place tom stop ever....
Comment Written 19-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2018
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You have so ended my day on a high, Gareth! Thank you so much for your wonderful review and all those shiny stars. I'll go and sort those errors out now. I'm not sure what Mildred is going to say yet, but it won't be complimentary! LOL. Big hugs, my friend. Sandra xxx
Comment from wordsfromsue
OOOH!!! Tell me she gets to kill Gladys' toad of a husband!!!! I hope she makes it slow and painful.... bwa ha ha. ;-)
Great chapter, Sandra..... you must have done so much research for this book, you secret keeper, you.
I can't wait for the next installment. :-)
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2018
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OOOH!!! Tell me she gets to kill Gladys' toad of a husband!!!! I hope she makes it slow and painful.... bwa ha ha. ;-)
Great chapter, Sandra..... you must have done so much research for this book, you secret keeper, you.
I can't wait for the next installment. :-)
Comment Written 19-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2018
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LOL! There is a wicked side to you, Sue! LOL, but I like it! Thank you for all those lovely stars and you extremely funny review.
I was going to post another before Christmas. but it will have to wait until afterwards, but before the New Year, so not too long to wait. Big hugs, my friend. Sandra xxxxx
I'm getting Eric's book before Christmas now! Wahoooooo!!! :)) xxxx
Comment from Sugarray77
You are doing a good job keeping the tension and mystery high. So many moving parts keep this story interesting for the reader. Well done on presentation and dialogue.
Melissa
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2018
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You are doing a good job keeping the tension and mystery high. So many moving parts keep this story interesting for the reader. Well done on presentation and dialogue.
Melissa
Comment Written 18-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2018
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Thank you so much, Melissa, for another wonderful review! I'm so pleased you are still enjoying it. Big hugs, and a very happy Christmas! :) Sandra xx
Comment from Mastery
Hi, Sandra. This is a well-written chapter. I do not review with looking form punctuation errors. Rather ai review to see how well the stories are coming along . I admiree your style, too.
Just tjhought i'd let you know that. LOL
Your images are very very well done. like this: I can picture it thanks to your talented pen.
" I grabbed the letter from James and started to read it, my hands shaking as I did. It was dated the 26th of April 1916, just one week before the newspaper Mildred had shown me said the Germans had declared victory--and three days before the internet said the battle of Jutland took place. After I'd read the last paragraph for a second time, I slumped down on the sofa with the letter still clutched in my hand."
Greart hook at the end too, my friend. Happy Holidays. Bob
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2018
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Hi, Sandra. This is a well-written chapter. I do not review with looking form punctuation errors. Rather ai review to see how well the stories are coming along . I admiree your style, too.
Just tjhought i'd let you know that. LOL
Your images are very very well done. like this: I can picture it thanks to your talented pen.
" I grabbed the letter from James and started to read it, my hands shaking as I did. It was dated the 26th of April 1916, just one week before the newspaper Mildred had shown me said the Germans had declared victory--and three days before the internet said the battle of Jutland took place. After I'd read the last paragraph for a second time, I slumped down on the sofa with the letter still clutched in my hand."
Greart hook at the end too, my friend. Happy Holidays. Bob
Comment Written 18-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2018
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Thank you so much, Bob! That is so nice of you. I hope you have a wonderful Christmas and a fabulous, healthy 2019. Big hugs, Sandra xx
Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi, Sandra,
This is such an intricate chapter, and the conclusion gave me goosebumps. To realize that the only way to fulfill your mission is to kill someone is a horrible feeling. Despite knowing that things could forever be changed, killing another human being is VERY difficult for a good person.
I anxiously await the next chapter,
~patty~
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2018
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Hi, Sandra,
This is such an intricate chapter, and the conclusion gave me goosebumps. To realize that the only way to fulfill your mission is to kill someone is a horrible feeling. Despite knowing that things could forever be changed, killing another human being is VERY difficult for a good person.
I anxiously await the next chapter,
~patty~
Comment Written 18-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2018
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Hi Patty,
It is, and dear Mildred doesn't have a killers instinct, it will be interesting how they work this one out! lol. Thank you for reading this part, my friend, next part is being sorted now. Big hugs, my friend. :) Sandra xx