This Time - That Time 3
Viewing comments for Chapter 13 "Mildred! Remember Your Age!"Third book in the time travel trilogy
33 total reviews
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Hmmm! This one gave more mysteries than answers, you tricky author, you! Why, I think you're trying to get me to keep reading the day away!! Okay then! Twist my arm!! Next?!! xo
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2019
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Hmmm! This one gave more mysteries than answers, you tricky author, you! Why, I think you're trying to get me to keep reading the day away!! Okay then! Twist my arm!! Next?!! xo
Comment Written 24-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2019
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LOL, I'm glad you liked this part! :)) xxxx
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Loved it!! xo
Comment from wordsfromsue
What a good chapter!! Lots of descriptions and information. Fancy Mildred, making the most of her situation!
Don't tell me, she'll fall in love, marry Tommy and stay in that time!!!
And just where do you have Veronica at now?!
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2018
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What a good chapter!! Lots of descriptions and information. Fancy Mildred, making the most of her situation!
Don't tell me, she'll fall in love, marry Tommy and stay in that time!!!
And just where do you have Veronica at now?!
Comment Written 02-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2018
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Now, now Sue, you know she's not normal! LOL, In more ways than one! Thank you again, for another wonderful 'Sue' review. I always love what you have to say. You put a smile on my face each time. Biggest ever hugs, my friend, and I can't wait for you to come over in the Spring. If no one is staying here, and we are still living here, you are welcome to come and stay. When I say, still living here, I mean in this house and not in an old age pensioners flat. :( xxx
Comment from meeshu
I am glad we are moving to another time and another adventure. i'll admit I was not that keen on the hospital and trying to figure who was dead and who wasn't. I look forward to the next installment, Sandra...................meeshu
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2018
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I am glad we are moving to another time and another adventure. i'll admit I was not that keen on the hospital and trying to figure who was dead and who wasn't. I look forward to the next installment, Sandra...................meeshu
Comment Written 15-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2018
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LOL!! It would be difficult to work that out, I agree. Thank you, Meeshu, for your lovely review. Hospital is over for a while. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment from kiwijenny
This is a fascinating read. I'm sorry I have jumped in because it makes it hard to critique. But I loved the characters. The rude ghost Cecil the good ex wife...so good and a loving mother. Very well written
Good job
God bless
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2018
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This is a fascinating read. I'm sorry I have jumped in because it makes it hard to critique. But I loved the characters. The rude ghost Cecil the good ex wife...so good and a loving mother. Very well written
Good job
God bless
Comment Written 15-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2018
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It does have a fair share of twists in it, too, Jenny, so I can quite understand. I'm just pleased that you liked all the characters, Cecil is rather a naughty ghost, lol. Thank you, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment from rspoet
Hello Sandra,
Cecil sounds like he would fit in very nicely at Hogwarts. lol
Now the question is: How old is Mildred, she hasn't even been born yet.
Of course, the powers might be a bit upset if Mildred gets
too mischeivious with Tommy. A lot of time lines would be disrupted.
Charles will have to get some punishment, he can't get away with murder.
Suffragettes will be pounding on your door.
Another wrinkle in time. Very good! Time travel is a tricky business.
We see what the powers are up to this time.
Why are there no female powers?
Perhaps one should be name Sandra - Supreme Power.
Excellent chapter, my friend
Robert
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2018
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Hello Sandra,
Cecil sounds like he would fit in very nicely at Hogwarts. lol
Now the question is: How old is Mildred, she hasn't even been born yet.
Of course, the powers might be a bit upset if Mildred gets
too mischeivious with Tommy. A lot of time lines would be disrupted.
Charles will have to get some punishment, he can't get away with murder.
Suffragettes will be pounding on your door.
Another wrinkle in time. Very good! Time travel is a tricky business.
We see what the powers are up to this time.
Why are there no female powers?
Perhaps one should be name Sandra - Supreme Power.
Excellent chapter, my friend
Robert
Comment Written 15-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2018
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You have posed some very important questions here, Robert, and all of them will be answered ... soon! (did you really think I'd tell you??? LOL) Okay, I'll answer one of them ... You were right about one thing, I truly am the Powers SUPREME OVERLORD!! :)) Graham will vouch for my capabilities in that position! LOL :))) Thank you so much for the six stars, and wonderful review, my friend. Big hugs, Sandra xxx
Comment from Pam (respa)
-An excellent chapter, Sandra, that flows well,
and even has quite a bit of humor.
-It is nice to see Ver. and Mildred
sharing quips with one another,
and Gladys in the middle, wondering
how they are seeing her, etc.
-Ver.'s attire certainly draws attention from Cecil!
-Mildred seems like she would have made
a very good nurse; I am glad to see her in an
important role, and enjoying her work.
-It is also good to see Tommy's success as a
doctor, and having a mother who could
have incriminated her husband,
but looked out for her son, instead.
-I doubt whether it would have worked out otherwise.
-The ending is certainly intriguing, and we are
left to speculate about where Ver. is and James is not.
-It reminds me of being at Mrs. Humphries' cottage.
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2018
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-An excellent chapter, Sandra, that flows well,
and even has quite a bit of humor.
-It is nice to see Ver. and Mildred
sharing quips with one another,
and Gladys in the middle, wondering
how they are seeing her, etc.
-Ver.'s attire certainly draws attention from Cecil!
-Mildred seems like she would have made
a very good nurse; I am glad to see her in an
important role, and enjoying her work.
-It is also good to see Tommy's success as a
doctor, and having a mother who could
have incriminated her husband,
but looked out for her son, instead.
-I doubt whether it would have worked out otherwise.
-The ending is certainly intriguing, and we are
left to speculate about where Ver. is and James is not.
-It reminds me of being at Mrs. Humphries' cottage.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2018
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Hi Pam, thank you for another of your wonderful reviews and all the stars!! Things are changing and Veronica is beginning to feel out of her depth in this assignment, it's a hard one. But, we won't give up on her, she's also a strong woman. I'm really pleased you liked this part, my friend, there are subtle clues in there which will show themselves soon. :)) Have a wonderful day, my friend, big hugs!! :)) Sandra xxx
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You are very welcome and deserving, Sandra. We will not give up on Ver. She did have a little difficulty with her attire, though, and then she doesn't know where she is. I am sticking with my guess!
Comment from alexisleech
What a great chapter, Sandra. You've managed to pack in so much, and as usual, you have the reader transported to the place with all your characters.
So, where has Veronica gone now? I can't wait to find out!
Alexis xxx
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2018
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What a great chapter, Sandra. You've managed to pack in so much, and as usual, you have the reader transported to the place with all your characters.
So, where has Veronica gone now? I can't wait to find out!
Alexis xxx
Comment Written 15-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2018
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Thank you so much, Alexis for this wonderful review!!! And the icing on the cake too, with the 6 golden stars, that is so nice of you, my friend, Sending you a big hug!! :)) Sandra xxx
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello
Smiles to you Sandra, I really liked reading this chapter and it's wonderful of how you made the dialog interesting to read and I like your
characters, and how you kept the dialog so interesting and your plot twists.
Gert
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2018
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Hello
Smiles to you Sandra, I really liked reading this chapter and it's wonderful of how you made the dialog interesting to read and I like your
characters, and how you kept the dialog so interesting and your plot twists.
Gert
Comment Written 15-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2018
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Thank you, dear Gert. I'm so pleased you liked this part ... the plot will twist again, confusing poor Veronica. Big hugs, my friend. :) Sandra xx
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You are welcome Sandra
Gert
Comment from giraffmang
Excellent continuation here, Sandra. technically sound. the write is crisp and engaging. Mildred & Veronica's characters remain spot on in consistency. Over three books is quite a feat.
Do you really need the definitions of pore? lol
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2018
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Excellent continuation here, Sandra. technically sound. the write is crisp and engaging. Mildred & Veronica's characters remain spot on in consistency. Over three books is quite a feat.
Do you really need the definitions of pore? lol
Comment Written 15-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2018
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Aww, thank you, Gareth! Yes, three books, this is the last one, I don't think I can go on with it and keep the characters as they are much longer. There is a big twist coming. I put that definition on because I had a pm saying it was a spelling mistake. I explained that it's a completely different word, but it was suggested I add something in my authors notes. I never gave it a thought till then, but you're right, I will take it out. Thank you so much for the lovely six stars, my friend, that is so appreciated. Big hugs. Sandra xxx
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
Oh dear, where is Veronica now? I didn't see any errors and as always it is well written and interesting. I'm enjoying the story and looking forward to finding out where Veronica is.
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2018
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Oh dear, where is Veronica now? I didn't see any errors and as always it is well written and interesting. I'm enjoying the story and looking forward to finding out where Veronica is.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2018
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That's exactly what Veronica said! lol!! Thank you so much, Rox, I'm glad you enjoyed it. Big hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xx