Comment from Rachelle Allen

Excellent

Okay, I'm sorry to sound like a record that's skipping and replaying the same words over and over, but this is SO good!! I'm loving the adventure of it and will mull it over all day. I can't wait to read what happens next!! Awesome job, Sandra!! You are so VERY talented!! xo

 Comment Written 07-Jun-2019

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reply by the author on 07-Jun-2019

I love your reviews! Thank you so much again, lol. I don't know about you, but I must find more ways to tell you how chuffed I am that you are reading this. Thanks, my friend. :)) Sandra xx

Comment from JDRBAR

Excellent

I am finally back on, and none too soon. I'm already behind on your story. I'll read Chapter six in the morning before I dive into my genealogy. I'd also like to post a chapter on Charlotte as well but of course I haven't done any reviewing so no promotion money yet. Going to be a busy morning LOLGreat chapter my friend.

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 25-Sep-2018

Thank goodness! I was so worried that I wouldn't find out what happens with Char! lol. I'n glad you're back, Diane. Thanks for reading this part, and look forward to your thoughts on the next one. Get reviewing girl, and get that next part of Char out!!! :))) Sandra xxx

Comment from alexisleech

Exceptional

No errors that I can see, Sandra, but I was so busy reading, checking for spag was the last thing on my mind. Knowing you, the story will take us to places we can all imagine in our minds - superb writing, as usual!

Alexis xxx

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Sep-2018

Bless your lovely heart, Alexis, thank you so much for your lovely review and for giving me another super 6! You are a diamond! Big hugs, my friend. :) Sandra xxx

Comment from apky

Excellent

Uh-oh. You have done this chapter in such a clever twist.

I'm so dying to know how Mildred will fare when Veronica is invisible! But there again, knowing my beloved Mildred, she'll make a rattling fab job of things.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Sep-2018

Thank you, Aki! Mildred will really enjoy herself in this book. She doesn't know it yet, though. :))

I haven't started The Dream, yet, I want to finish the book I'm on, and then make sure I can go from book 1 though to 3 without interruption, which will be at the end of this month. I'll get the other two books when I start this one. I do love books that have more than one story. You've written loads! As soon as I start it, I'll let you know. :)) xxxx

Comment from Roxanna Andrews

Excellent

Oh dear, what will become of Gladys? It will be interesting to see how things will go with Veronica invisible and Mildred visible. Very well done as always. Looking forward to the next chapter. Rox

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Sep-2018

Hi Rox, thank you for your lovely review. I really appreciate you. Gladys is not in a good place, as we shall soon see. :( Big hugs, my friend! :) Sandra xxx

Comment from Pam (respa)

Exceptional

-A good chapter, Sandra.
-I like the discussion among
the powers in the beginning,
esp. deciding that Ver. will continue
to be invisible and Jowell's
pride for the costume idea.
-It's always nice to see Ver. and
her family back together.
-This time James was pleased
that Mildred was with her.
-I liked the reference to Mildred
looking 'fetching' in her costume,
and Ver.'s observations about Mildred
not thinking she was attractive.
-The ending is very good, and
indicates that all may not be
well for Gladys, especially with
the attitude of her husband.

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Sep-2018

It's not until you really look into the lives the women were forced to live, that you appreciate what they did for us.

Thank you so much for another of your lovely review, my friend. The reason Veronica and Mildred are being sent back in time, will be slowly unravelled from now on. :)) It's not political either. Big hugs, my friend. :) Sandra xxx

reply by Pam (respa) on 19-Sep-2018

I agree about looking into things and realizing what was done for us in the present time by those in the past who took a chance to make things better. You are very welcome and deserving of the review. I will wait for the mystery to unravel.

Comment from rspoet

Exceptional

Hello Sandra,
An excellent idea to make Veronica invisible, again.
She can do much more when no one can see her.

"I'll send a runner with messages for you all.'
One would think the future powers would be beyond "runners'. lol

Mildred adds a new dimension to the story, and expands the possibilities
with one person visible and the other not.

I wonder if Winston C will appear at some point. That could be fun.
It looks like we'll be going to a trial.
Maybe Gladys could get Rumpole of the Bailey for a lawyer. (one of my favorites)
Another very fine chapter, my friend.
Well done
Robert

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Sep-2018

Winston will make another short appearance, but not saying when! :)

I think it's more fun when Veronica can flit about here and there, I wish I could be invisible sometimes. lol.
I like Rumpole, too, and have watched all the repeats as well. Veronica could learn from him.
You are right about the runner. I think I was remembering films of ancient Egypt and the Roman era. But, the powers that would most definitely be too advanced for that. I'll change that. :)
Thank you so much, Robert, for this lovely review and adding that about the runners. And a big hug for the 6 stars!! Just don't tell Pam, she's my friend!!! :)) Sandra xxx

Comment from l.raven

Excellent

HI Sandra, this is a strange one...as they have no idea what is going on...the thing about is...Gladys's stayed with it after they left...it sounds like she is the one going to need the help...and the son...but I agree Veronica should go back unseen...Mildred can take care of herself...lets see where this one takes us...maybe a hint...hmmmmmm....very well written my sweet wonderful friend...and I love your story told...love soooo very much you....Linda xxoo
Oh!!! and I love when you mention Ann...LOL...

say hi to Ian for me...and hope he doing well...xxoo love

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2018

Thank you, my dear friend. No, they don't know yet what is going on, but when they do, it will quite a shock! Will they be able to right it this time? LOL! Love your review, my dear Linda. :)) Love you too, my wonderful friend. :)) Sandra xx

Just seen your email, the photos didn't come through, can you send again? :)) xxxx

reply by l.raven on 18-Sep-2018

I just sent the one photo...but I took the picture on my Ipad...LOL...didn't want to look for my camera...where's my hint???...I will be as shocked as they are...LOL...your so welcome beautiful girl...alwayssssssss...love you MUCHHHHHH...xxoo

reply by the author on 19-Sep-2018

I got it!! And I loved his room, I think Eric would love it too. LOL. I'll have to show him that photo. Thank you, dear friend!! xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

reply by l.raven on 19-Sep-2018

smiling big you...I love my grand kids so much...but I still feel they get way to much stuff...I put money in their savings accounts now for birthdays and holidays...they get enough material things from family and friends...sssssooooo welcome...after reading your story...Noah told his mother...we have to go back to Dinosaur World...and take grandma...LOL...love you much...xxoo

Comment from tfawcus

Exceptional

Another excellent chapter. It's interesting being able to listen in on the powers that be, and good that you don't let the readers get too far ahead of the characters in terms of knowledge. The return to modern times had just the right amount of domesticity as counterbalance and contrast against the situation in the Admiral's household.
One apostrophe missing [all our lot(')s doing]
Looking forward to reading the next episode. You've created a real page-turner!

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 17-Sep-2018

What a lovely review, Tony, thank you so much. I'm glad you like the way it's going. Sending a big hugs for the 6 stars, too. Thank you!! :)) Sandra xx

Comment from Phyllis Stewart

Exceptional

Sounds like Gladys is in trouble with the admiral! I wonder why she married him in the first place.

had been altered; which now appeared <-- Incorrect semi-colon. Change to comma.

One, was one too many! <-- Remove comma. It separates subject noun from predicate verb, a big no-no.

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 17-Sep-2018

Hi, Phyllis, thank you so much for all those lovely stars and the corrections. I think I should sue my English teacher, trouble is, she must be looooong gone by now. I'll have to look her up when I go up! LOL. Thank you, dear friend. :)) Sandra. xx

I just noticed your contest entry, are you posting the beginning of your short story this week? :)

reply by Phyllis Stewart on 17-Sep-2018

I may post part of the short story, but think it might be better left till next week. I'll get it ready in preview mode and decide then.