Summer Rain
Poem of 25 Words7 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This twenty-five-word poem, Summer Rain, captures the sounds and smells of the relief realized as the stifled earth is refreshed with the liquid life. Nice.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2018
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This twenty-five-word poem, Summer Rain, captures the sounds and smells of the relief realized as the stifled earth is refreshed with the liquid life. Nice.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2018
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Comment from Cindy McIntyre
Wow. Your last two lines are very stunning. "The lilies drink" is a standout line. This is a great response to this twenty-five word writing prompt/contest. I hope you do well in the contest.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2018
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Wow. Your last two lines are very stunning. "The lilies drink" is a standout line. This is a great response to this twenty-five word writing prompt/contest. I hope you do well in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2018
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Comment from Donka Kristeva
Short, delightful, refreshing poem. Inspires me with its simplicity, beauty (of words and art work) and liveliness. Rain is a blessing from heaven to a thirsty land.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2018
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Short, delightful, refreshing poem. Inspires me with its simplicity, beauty (of words and art work) and liveliness. Rain is a blessing from heaven to a thirsty land.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2018
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Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks how enjoying it is to watch when at summer night it rains, scent of rains blows in air and blends the scent of rain with the freshness of soil and you find to feel joy sight heaven meets earth; well said, well done. Keep Writing Inspire Changing -- DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2018
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This speaks how enjoying it is to watch when at summer night it rains, scent of rains blows in air and blends the scent of rain with the freshness of soil and you find to feel joy sight heaven meets earth; well said, well done. Keep Writing Inspire Changing -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 27-Jul-2018
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Comment from Kathleen S.
Beautiful. My daughter likes rain storms, so this kind reminds me of her. I like that new fresh scent after it rains, like you talk about in your poem. I love lilies as well.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2018
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Beautiful. My daughter likes rain storms, so this kind reminds me of her. I like that new fresh scent after it rains, like you talk about in your poem. I love lilies as well.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2018
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Comment from Tootie
This is a great entry for the contest. Well-chosen words and awesome image. I like the title too. Wishing you the best in the contest. Blessings, Cathy
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2018
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This is a great entry for the contest. Well-chosen words and awesome image. I like the title too. Wishing you the best in the contest. Blessings, Cathy
Comment Written 27-Jul-2018
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Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image and presentation.
-You have written a good poem
with the required 25 words.
-The imagery and description is good,
along with the addition of alliteration.
-The mood of summer is created,
and the conclusion is good.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2018
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-Very nice image and presentation.
-You have written a good poem
with the required 25 words.
-The imagery and description is good,
along with the addition of alliteration.
-The mood of summer is created,
and the conclusion is good.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2018
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Thank you for taking the time to read and share your insights!
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You are welcome.