Goodbye
short poem10 total reviews
Comment from victor 66
I don't know how any guy could say good by to this lady. You have followed the rules of the prompt and I wish you the best in this contest. Good luck.
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I don't know how any guy could say good by to this lady. You have followed the rules of the prompt and I wish you the best in this contest. Good luck.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2015
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Comment from TPAC
I feel the intents in this write grabbing in its appeal and captivating in expressed thoughts. Line structuring making this work a positive read. I found a good write.
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I feel the intents in this write grabbing in its appeal and captivating in expressed thoughts. Line structuring making this work a positive read. I found a good write.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2015
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Comment from 4hisglory
So sad. Makes me wonder, why did leave? Will he ever be back? Looks like he will not. The picture goes well with the poem.
Good entry for the contest. Blessings, LaVonne
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So sad. Makes me wonder, why did leave? Will he ever be back? Looks like he will not. The picture goes well with the poem.
Good entry for the contest. Blessings, LaVonne
Comment Written 04-Sep-2015
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Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
I like your 1/6/1 poem about saying goodbye. Good job with the syllable count and a beautiful presentation, I like the picture. Good luck!
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I like your 1/6/1 poem about saying goodbye. Good job with the syllable count and a beautiful presentation, I like the picture. Good luck!
Comment Written 04-Sep-2015
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Comment from LeslieP5
Sad little poem that rhymes and fits the contest requirements. I like the use of guy for your first word and the action second line. Cry is the obvious ending. Good luck in the contest.
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Sad little poem that rhymes and fits the contest requirements. I like the use of guy for your first word and the action second line. Cry is the obvious ending. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2015
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Comment from pickmeplease
Nice. I like that it captures a moment in time...tells a story. Interesting picture pairing. Sad yet focused. Good luck.
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Nice. I like that it captures a moment in time...tells a story. Interesting picture pairing. Sad yet focused. Good luck.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2015
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Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is an excellent write, mystery writer, you did an excellent job writing this 1 6 1 poem. it's hard to write these that make sense with the required rhyming of all lines, but you did it well. I love the picture. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2015
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this is an excellent write, mystery writer, you did an excellent job writing this 1 6 1 poem. it's hard to write these that make sense with the required rhyming of all lines, but you did it well. I love the picture. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2015
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Comment from ellie6
A lot said in a tiny poem. The illstration, showing a girl with a sad face, fits the theme well. It is difficult to convey a message in such a short verse, but you just did it. Well done.
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2015
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A lot said in a tiny poem. The illstration, showing a girl with a sad face, fits the theme well. It is difficult to convey a message in such a short verse, but you just did it. Well done.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2015
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Comment from Jeanie Mercer
This is an appealing 1-6-1 syllable poem, and it follows the criteria of the prompt in syllable count, form and rhyme. The presentation is very pretty. Good luck to you, Jeanie Mercer
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This is an appealing 1-6-1 syllable poem, and it follows the criteria of the prompt in syllable count, form and rhyme. The presentation is very pretty. Good luck to you, Jeanie Mercer
Comment Written 03-Sep-2015
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Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Very creative. I think you have done a great job with a touch poetry challenge. I like how you can picture him in your head and the last word really emphasizes what is going on. Great job.
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2015
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Very creative. I think you have done a great job with a touch poetry challenge. I like how you can picture him in your head and the last word really emphasizes what is going on. Great job.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2015
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