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The envelope

Don't let him get away.

2 total reviews 
Comment from Joan E.
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This form is much a harder to create than it appears. I liked your mono-verse rhyme and sentimental artwork. Best wishes in the contest- Joan

 Comment Written 28-Jun-2015

reply by the author on 28-Jun-2015
    It is tough. Not my favorite form but it does present a challenge. Thanks for reviewing.
Comment from Glasstruth
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Nice enjambment, especially with a rhyme that sounds so natural is amazing. Just eight syllables and I know writing something like this is not easy. Superb. Good luck with the contest. Les

 Comment Written 28-Jun-2015

reply by the author on 28-Jun-2015
    It is a challenging form. Thanks for the kind review.