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The Heart of Poetry

Viewing comments for Chapter 92 "We talk about love"
'Tis not the Bard, but pretty good poetry anyway

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Comment from Sanku
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I know , expressing your love is much much better than talking endlessly about it .by the way a very Happy new Year to you .may the year 2015 bring you health and happiness
My greetings and wishes to your family .

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 27-Jan-2015
    Thank you Sanku and the best to you as well. I always appreciate your fine comments. :-) Carolyn
Comment from Rosalyne
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Hi, Carolyn.
This is beautiful and says so much in few words. Like with writing, show, don't just tell. Words are nice, action speaks the loudest.
Bye
Rosalyne :)

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 19-Jan-2015
    Thank you Rosalyn, :-) Carolyn
Comment from misscookie
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Sorry so late to response. I'm so back up. You captured my attention from the start.
Your words are few but from the heart.
I love the message
Thank you for sharing

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 19-Jan-2015
    Thanks misscookie,
    I'm glad you enjoyed this one.
    :-) Carolyn
Comment from The Death
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Hi, Carolyn.

Nice commentary in this potent poem! Excellent word economy, with every syllable utilized so well. Only actions can prove our willingness to do something. You have nicely captured a strong message here.

Regards,
Anupam

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 19-Jan-2015
    Hi Anupam,
    I like what you said, word economy... Fits a short syllable count perfectly.
    Thanks, Carolyn
Comment from l.raven
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HI Carolyn, this is what God wants from...to love one another...not hate...I love the wording in your poem...show your love today...Luff Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 17-Jan-2015
    Thank you dear Linda,
    Let me take this opportunity to say... I Love YOu my friend,, :-) Carolyn
reply by l.raven on 17-Jan-2015
    and I love you too Carolyn...you are truly a wonderful friend...love ya...smiling big...
Comment from Curly Girly
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Mmm...
We talk about love

Demonstration is better

Show your love today

You summed it up well. I like this little haiku. Actions do speak louder than hollow words.

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 17-Jan-2015
    Thanks Nicole for enjoying this one, :-) Carolyn
Comment from Irish Rain
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So true..talk is just talk, action is what motivates! This is a great little treasure, the blue color of sincerity really sets it off!

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 17-Jan-2015
    Thanks Irish, I am glad you liked this one, thanks for calling it a treasure. :-) Carolyn
Comment from adewpearl
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Your poem is in excellent 5/7/5 syllable count
you make an insightful point
and one worth living by -I love the quote in your author line - yep, lots of people claim to love a variety of other people from spouses to the poor and downtrodden, but not nearly as many of them walk the walk while talking the talk... Brooke

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 17-Jan-2015
    Thanks Brooke for this sincere commentary on the poem. I appreciate that, :-) Carolyn
Comment from Tomes Johnston
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This is a very sentimental poem and it rings true. We should all listen to the ideals in this poem. This I a lovely piece of writing.

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 17-Jan-2015
    Thanks Tom, I always enjoy your comments and that you look for an application, :-) Carolyn
reply by Tomes Johnston on 17-Jan-2015
    My pleasure
Comment from angelface2
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Oh, Carolyn, this is so beautiful. Your poem is so true. It tells a great message. And they know we are Christians by our love. I like that verse from he Bible. There is a song by that name I think. Very nicely written. :>D Miss Sally

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 17-Jan-2015
    Thanks Miss Sally, Yes there is a neat song with those words, as well as the verse. I am so glad you enjoyed this one, :-) Carolyn