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Viewing comments for Chapter 101 "Crystal moonlight"
'Tis not the Bard, but pretty good poetry anyway

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Comment from Pyrrho
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Usually free verse does not work for me and I read rapidly and pass on reviewing but your enthusiasm shines through on this and you deserve a positive comment from this rhymer

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 09-Jan-2015
    Hi there, I am glad this one worked for you. :-) I appreciate your comments. :-) Carolyn
Comment from country ranch writer
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REFLECTIONS ON THE LAKE OR RIVER MAKE IT A PRETTY SIGHT BUT IS ALSO COLD, DANGEROUS AND DEADLY TO THOSE THAT VENTURE OUT ON THE ICE

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 09-Jan-2015
    That is so true, thank you for the fine comments.
    How are you doing these days.
    :-) Carolyn
reply by country ranch writer on 09-Jan-2015
    OH DOING OKAY I GUESS DON'T DO MUCH TO WORRY OVER WHAT I CAN'T CHANGE
Comment from GracieAnn
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Carolyn this ABC Poetry Contest entry follows the contest rules and creates a fresh new look at winter. I enjoyed the ice-clad description and the Queens jewels most. Well done. All the best in the contest. :0 GracieAnn

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 05-Jan-2015
    Thanks for the great comments and best wishes. :-) Carolyn
Comment from angelface2
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You are quite right, Carolyn. I love a moonlit night like that. This is quite a good poem and I love the line Making the Queen's jewelry jealous. Very picturesque. Thanks for sharing. :>D Miss Sally

 Comment Written 04-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 05-Jan-2015
    Thanks for this wonderful review of Crystal moonlight.
    :-) Carolyn
Comment from Irish Rain
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Beautiful entry for this ABC contest...I like the comparisons between the shiny sparkle of ice, and the queens jewelry...excellent!

 Comment Written 03-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 05-Jan-2015
    Hi there, so glad you enjoyed this one. :-) Carolyn
Comment from sweetwoodjax
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this is an excellent write, Carolyn, you did an excellent job writing this abc poem about the beauty of an icy night as the moonlight shares its light. I enjoyed reading it. good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 03-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 05-Jan-2015
    Thanks for the good wishes for the contest. I am delighted you enjoyed the poem. :-) Carolyn
Comment from Cajungirl
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What a beautiful scenery you painted with your words. I can only imagine this glorious site. Best of luck in the contest. Happy New Year.

 Comment Written 03-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 03-Jan-2015
    Happy New Year to you too V. Take care and thank you. :-) Carolyn
Comment from l.raven
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HI Carolyn...this is where I wish I had a six for you...******...I so love the wording in your poem...and yes...I love beautiful nights like this...I love your poem...and the picture is stunning...very well written...Luff Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 03-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 03-Jan-2015
    I will count it as a sixer... LOL... as Maureen used to say.. a virtual six.. Thank you for liking this one. When I saw that pic I had to use it.
    Hope the New Year holds all you desire and more
    Love, Carolyn
reply by l.raven on 03-Jan-2015
    yours too Carolyn...I love Winter poems...and the pictures...I don't blame you...sweet dreams you...Luff Linda xxoo
Comment from seaglass
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In Wyoming, I loved waking up to a crystal morning. Your poem paints a picture I remember so well. I love the comparison with jewels as it fits the shimmer and glitter so well.

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 03-Jan-2015
    Thanks seaglass,
    Jackson Hole is a wonderful place to visit. The Tetons are grand and graced with snow make a spectacular sight. So glad you enjoyed this one.
    :-) Carolyn
Comment from livelylinda
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notesandmore: original theme using lovely words painting a scene I remember from my days in Michigan. A beautiful picture to enhance. Good ABC poem which flowed from line to line easily. livelylinda

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 02-Jan-2015
    Thanks livelylinda,
    I appreciate your fine review and encouragement.
    :-) Carolyn