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A prayer

3-5-3 Air poem

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Comment from GracieAnn
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Sanku, this older 3-5-3 'Air' Poem writing prompt entry is well constructed conveying deep meaning in so few words. The personification is powerful. Well done. :0 GracieAnn

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2014

reply by the author on 23-Sep-2014
    Thank you very much, gracie ann.
Comment from acerisestory
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This is a well done 3-5-3 poem, Sanku. If only God's storm could blast away the horrible things that are happening in our world right now. I like your repetition of from in the second and third lines.

Good luck in the contest. Alana

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2014

reply by the author on 18-Sep-2014
    Thank you ,Alana for reading and reviewing .
    sanku.
Comment from Selina Stambi
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A beautiful prayer, Santha.

If only it were as simple as that, right?

The evening news is full of despair and horror these days, isn't it? I am reluctant to turn it on, sometimes.

Hope you're having a wonderful week, my friend.

Love,

Sonali

 Comment Written 02-Sep-2014

reply by the author on 12-Sep-2014
    Thank you ,Sonali.I know, you don't want to turn the tv on and the news papers are full of ,if not war stories ,stories about murder burglary etc .Most scary part is the murders committed on elderly women who lives alone ,mainly for the gold they wear!( in India wearing Gold is a must,unfortunately!) love ,take care
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
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Hi,

Love the poem. The fierce wave of water in the artwork really adds impact too. Great presentation for an entry.

Nicely done. Good luck in the contest.

Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax (*-*)

 Comment Written 28-Aug-2014

reply by the author on 01-Sep-2014
    thank you very much.
Comment from Smoothiecool
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good luck in the contest

your syllable count spot on

your few words in three lines portrays the hate of the world

cheers smoothiecool

 Comment Written 28-Aug-2014

reply by the author on 01-Sep-2014
    thank you very much.
Comment from Acquired Taste
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What a lovely 3-5-3 about faith. Now, if only we might expect a storm could do exactly that - how much nicer we would all be. The photo is a terrific choice for your words. My wishes for good luck! AT=/

 Comment Written 28-Aug-2014

reply by the author on 01-Sep-2014
    Thank you very much ,yeah, it was a wishful thinking.
Comment from Dean Kuch
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That would be nice, author, if strong, stirring storms could in fact whisk away all of the hatred from the face of the earth. I can think of one way this could happen. God could unleash another flood much as He did the first time. However, that option is off the table, so to speak, as He's promised us the world would never again be destroyed by water. Now, winds and fire, well...that's another story.

Well done, and best of luck to you in the contest.:}

 Comment Written 28-Aug-2014

reply by the author on 01-Sep-2014
    I am not so sure. the way many things are going now, we don't need any God to destroy us .We have become mammoth Gods with power to destroy ourselves. Thank you very much for reading.
reply by Dean Kuch on 01-Sep-2014
    At least we believe we are mammoth gods, and therein lies the problem...

    You are very welcome, Sanku.
Comment from skye
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Let this storm
from Thee blast off hate
from this world.

That is a true wish for our world.. for His wind to cleanse the evil and the hatred from our souls and purify each of us.
Excellent.

 Comment Written 28-Aug-2014

reply by the author on 01-Sep-2014
    Thank you very much.yes we need a cleansing wind.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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Beautiful picture and sentiment in your poem. I enjoyed reading and thinking abut its meaning. I see no changes needed. You did a great job with the prompt. Thanks for sharing. Good job and good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 28-Aug-2014

reply by the author on 01-Sep-2014
    Thank you very much.
Comment from Jeanie Mercer
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This meets the criteria of the prompt, and it is a good prayer to which many people around the world would say Amen. Good luck in the contest, Jeanie Mercer

 Comment Written 28-Aug-2014

reply by the author on 01-Sep-2014
    thank you very much.