Comment from mermaids

Excellent

While technology is wonderful and it is not everything,we still need human contact. Excellent 5-7-5 form that reflects today's world and what technology is not.

 Comment Written 21-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014

Thank you for a great review zanya

Comment from w.j.debi

Excellent

Now if only humans remember your wise words. It is getting so you get on an elevator or wait for a bus and not a soul speaks because everyone is concentrating on their phones.

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014

Yes absoloutely - the machine is firmly on the march ! zanya

Comment from Saucey

Excellent

How imaginative and clever, wouldn't that be perfect to have an app that can take away pain and brutality? I love this presentation. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014

Thank you indeed for a great review zanya

Comment from seaglass

Excellent

This is a very true message. If only there could be an app for peace and tolerance but that wouldn't line the pockets of the greedy.

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014

Yes wonder where it will all end ? Thaanks for reading and reviewing zanya

Comment from rrabinow

Excellent

I enjoyed reading your poem. Wonderfully written poem for this prompt. The syllable count is correct. Great picture as well. Best of luck.

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014

Thank you for reading and reviewing zanya

Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

Very true, Mystery Poet. There are apps for nearly everything you can think of nowadays. But no apps will bring love, understanding, happiness, peace... Those are in man's less than capable hands, I'm afraid.

Nicely done, and a good way to get the point across.

Good luck!

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014

Thanks for reading and for a great review zanya

reply by Dean Kuch on 24-Aug-2014

Sure, Zanya, no sweat.

Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Excellent

Hi,

Great nod to technology, with your great poem, and further emphasized with the cool artwork.

Nice presentation. Good luck in the contest.

Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax (*-*)

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2014

Thanks for reading and for the positive review zanya

Comment from Charlene0513

Excellent

The power to control what we do or want through such devices only adds a more dubious nature as to what the rage will be if they should get into the wrong hands.
Charlene

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2014

Thanks for reading and engaging and the interesting comment it's a brave new world ! zanya

Comment from kiwijenny

Excellent

I want an app for naps...that's all this insomniac asks....
I like this haiku...and claim the human touch...is best
God bless

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2014

Yes thanks for reading and review ing - wonder if there's an App for naps ?? zanya

Comment from Nosha17

Excellent

Yes, I agree, we humans will always be the superior beings! I don't have any apps, my phone isn't good enough, but fine for me. Great picture to compliment your poem, good choice of words. Good luck in the contest. Faye

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2014

Thanks for reviewing and engaging zanya