Comment from l.raven

Exceptional

OH Carolyn, this is just beautiful...I have read Maureen's poem...Bon Echo's sounds like a place I would love to visit...I love your poem...and a beautiful picture...so much beauty in nature...Luff Linda xxoo love ya...

 Comment Written 19-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 19-Jul-2014

Wow, a six for Bon Echo.... Thank you dear Linda... Maureen writes of Bon Echo so often, I love each poem she post. When she visits her cabin there, it must be a wonderfully relaxing time for her. Sleep tight... Love, Carolyn

reply by l.raven on 19-Jul-2014

I know...I keep telling her I am coming...LOL...you are so welcome...well deserved...you sleep tight too!!! sweet dreams...I am right behind you...Luff xxooo

Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

Bon Echo's Charm - add apostrophe for possessive
nature's beauty - add apostrophe for possessive
good consonance in beauty abounds
vivid detail of setting
good alliteration in timeless tango
water's sensual shape - add apostrophe
grace-carved wonder - add hyphen
Brooke :-)

 Comment Written 18-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 19-Jul-2014

Thanks for this through review. The edits are very helpful. :-) Carolyn

Comment from Irish Rain

Excellent

I just loved this, especially the line...grace carved wonder...what an original concept, carved by the timeless tango...beautiful...Blessings...Judy

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Jul-2014

Thank you so much Judy. :-) Carolyn

reply by Irish Rain on 18-Jul-2014

always welcome Carolyn!

Comment from Rosalyne

Excellent

Hi, Carolyn.
You have shown so well in your poem Bon Echo's rugged beauty. I live in Ontario and have been there myself. Ontario has many parks like this, all so beautiful and peaceful during the warmer months.
Bye
Rosalyne :)

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Jul-2014

I so appreciate your affirming comments about the picture and the poem. Hope you are having a great week. :-) Carolyn

Comment from Tomes Johnston

Excellent

This is yet another beautiful poem that the author has created about this beautiful place in this piece of writing. I would love to feel this way about a place, but unfortunately I don't feel that way about my home in Ireland and have never felt at home in the United Kingdom. Maybe I will find a place that I can call home some day.

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Jul-2014

It's been said that; 'home is where the heart is.' I hope and pray your heart finds it's home. It leads to a peaceful existence where-ever you are located. Thank you for enjoying this one Tom, :-) Carolyn

reply by Tomes Johnston on 18-Jul-2014

Thank you.

Comment from MizKat

Excellent

Hi Carolyn,

This is really beautiful and the picture you used with it is too. You always do such a great job in writing poetry and I always love the different styles you write. I look forward to when another poem will come, which always brings me happiness.

Kat

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Jul-2014

Thank you Kat, I will be sending another your way soon. Love, Carolyn

Comment from Cajungirl

Excellent

Your poem is beautiful and this looks like such a spectacular place to see. I love visiting with nature especially lakes and streams. Great job.

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Jul-2014

Thank you V for this great review. Maureen Napier has a cabin on the real Bon Echo Lake in Canada. Her pics and poems are fabulous, this one was for her.
:-) Carolyn

Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)

Excellent

A beautiful response to our dear friend's poem. Have you been there? I wish I had such a place to get away to. I spend nearly all my time at home. On the upside, I have lots of time to write. Hugs, Debbie

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Jul-2014

Good morning,
No, I haven't been there but it would make for a wonderful trip. I just love Maureen, and I love you. Thanks for your affirming comments about the poem.
You are so blessed with the talent and time to write your heart out. :-)
Carolyn

Comment from misscookie

Excellent

I have no more stars to give.
how blessed you two are to write such lovely words.
you mirror to each other well.
thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Jul-2014

Thanks misscookie,
I am always encouraged by your comments.
Love, Carolyn

reply by misscookie on 18-Jul-2014

Have a blessed and safe week- end.
Cookie

Comment from visionary1234

Excellent

This lake sounds like a very special place. Having read so long about it from Maureen, and now from you ... it seems that people fall in love with it, hmm? Love the "timeless tango" imagery here ... would probably suggest using the possessive 's' though ... :) Sharyn

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Jul-2014

Thank you Sharyn for your wonderful review. :-) Carolyn