Comment from w.j.debi

Excellent

What a gorgeous presentation, both in verse and the picture you have chosen to compliment it. Love the thought of understanding that slowly transcends. The closing line creates a vivid a and perfect image.

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2014

Thanks for this wonderful review and generous rating, :-) Carolyn

Comment from GracieAnn

Excellent

Carolyn, this is truly vivid and elicits serenity in the words chosen, the wisdom of being patient and the pleasant presentation as a total package. Well done. :0 GracieAnn

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2014

Hi there and thank you for your thoughtful comments. :-) Carolyn

Comment from Benny Beeharry

Excellent

Hi Carolyn
I am trulely inspired by this writing. It isso good that i am tempted ,and i would be wrong not to, to suggest that you concentrate on this kind of writing..inspirational and intuitive.
You will glow.
God bless
Benny Beeharry

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 25-Mar-2014

You are a good mentor Benny Beeharry. :-) Thank you for your wonderful comments. Have a great day,
Love, Carolyn

Comment from angelface2

Excellent

OO I love the picture. It's so beautiful. Perfect for your nice poem. sometimes it is hard to be serene and tranquil. God's paintings makes me have peace!! Lovely. Miss Sally

 Comment Written 24-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 25-Mar-2014

There is no greater artist is there? I am glad you enjoyed the presentation and poem. :-) Carolyn

Comment from Petriesan

Excellent

wonderful image. . panoply of peace, , , the word "Panoply" reads better silently that aloud, which is how I tend to read poems. Verbally, it is a word to stumble on. I cannot think of a better word though. . .

 Comment Written 24-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 25-Mar-2014

Thanks for the thoughtful comments. :-) Carolyn

Comment from Spitfire

Excellent

An excellent definition of tranquility descending not over night, but slowly. One nit:it's home (no apostrophe needed in this case.) Strong first and last lines.

 Comment Written 24-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 25-Mar-2014

Thanks Shari for a wonderful review and awesome rating of this one. I appreciate the 'nit.':-) Carolyn

Comment from Sanku

Excellent

You have a stunning picture of a violet twilight and to suit it perfectly an equally beautiful poem.God sends twilight slowly and gently which in turn allows peace to seep into the depths of your mind. this is a call to everyone not to neglect these everyday spectacle.like Wordsworth contemplation of god's glory(earth's beauty) will bring peace.

 Comment Written 24-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Mar-2014

I appreciate your thoughtful comments. I am glad you enjoyed
Tranquility Descends. :-) Carolyn

Comment from Maureen's Pen

Excellent

Dear Carolyn - my friend Jenny has a fabulous photo here and your words just marry it to create such an array of emotion. Loved this one - beautiful imagery, and grace for this moment. Wonderful work by two great artists.
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen

 Comment Written 24-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Mar-2014

How wonderful that you know the artist. I was so impressed with 'Raspberry Twilight' the moment I saw it. Thank you for this wonderful review and encouragement, I'm delighted you enjoyed it. Love you, have a great week, my dear friend, Carolyn

Comment from krys123

Excellent

Carolyn, you brought to life an effervescent sunset Which is described so elegantly and bewitchingly And they showed your creativity, ingenious and inventive approach to a natural occurrence. Thank you so much for sharing and posting of your work for everyone and may you always find love wherever you are.
Alex

 Comment Written 24-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Mar-2014

Thanks Alex, I appreciate your wonderful comments and enjoyed reading them. I am glad you liked Tranquility Descends.
Love, Carolyn

reply by krys123 on 24-Mar-2014

Carolyn, you are sincerely welcome and I like it a lot and I got through it easily.

Comment from MizKat

Excellent

Hi Carolyn,

You wrote a very beautiful poem with a lot of meaning to it.
The picture from jennyindy goes very well with your words. All around wonderful works.

Kat

 Comment Written 24-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Mar-2014

Thanks Kat for this great review. I'm glad you liked the poem and the awesome picture. Love, Carolyn