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A New Hobby

A change of perspective

8 total reviews 
Comment from rouskin
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A fresh perspective Dish washing was such a chore Now a new hobby! Excellent artwork and funny read I wish you the best of luck in the contest Blessings, Rouskin

 Comment Written 02-Mar-2014

reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014
    Thank you so much for reviewing my new hobby. Your comments and good wishes are appreciated.
Comment from nelliesellie
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I love the picture. I love the poem. I hate washing dishes. I took up a new hobby. Hiding the dishes in the dish washer. My sink is no longer a holding area for dirty dishes.Great work. Good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 02-Mar-2014

reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014
    I used to have a dish washer so have two dish related hobbies under my belt! Thank you so much for your warm review and good wishes.
Comment from write hand blue
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An interesting picture of creative vegetable arrangement, if I'm not mistaken. Lol.

Anything to lighten a chore. But a new hobby?

I wonder who the model was?

A well crafted funny poem.

:) mel.

 Comment Written 02-Mar-2014

reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014
    A housebound friend of mine was the model! I also undertake washing up in a different frame of mind now. Thank you for your encouraging revue.
Comment from Smoothiecool
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good luck in the contest
you have the correct line and syllable count
you allow the reader to see and feel that washing dishes was such a chore but now is a new hobby
flows well
cheers Smoothiecool

 Comment Written 02-Mar-2014

reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014
    Thank you for your positive comments and good wishes.
reply by Smoothiecool on 03-Mar-2014
    welcome...SC
Comment from harmony13
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Excellent Poem! The poem flowed and connected well. The author's words are clear and creative. The last line says it all. The artwork is perfect.

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2014

reply by the author on 01-Mar-2014
    Thank you for such a great review. You have given me a boost.
Comment from DonandVicki
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Excellent contest entry and a nice subtle humor encased in your short poem. The art work fits your poem to a T. Good luck in the contest. Don and Vicki

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2014

reply by the author on 01-Mar-2014
    This perspective came from a housebound friend. It has made a difference to my washing up! Thank you for such a positive review and your good wishes.
Comment from in777wr#
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This was a well written poem. Your 5-7-5 syllable count is in good order. I liked the message of this poem. We all may need a fresh perspective in some things in our lives. Very nice job.

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2014

reply by the author on 01-Mar-2014
    Your positive comments are much appreciated. Thank you.
reply by in777wr# on 01-Mar-2014
    You're welcome.
Comment from tfawcus
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Dishwashing! Poetry in motion! As if! I think you are soft-soaping us. At least it is now a chore with a hope of a prize! Good luck in the contest. This is certainly an original entry.

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2014

reply by the author on 01-Mar-2014
    Thanks for giving me a sparkling dish clean review! Thanks also for good wishes.