(5-7-5)-Count Dracula
vampires and fangs7 total reviews
Comment from Sueellen11
Great write well done,, like the picture and the ghost maiden,, your have met the contest requirements,, syllable count correct,,good luck,,blessings sueellen
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2013
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Great write well done,, like the picture and the ghost maiden,, your have met the contest requirements,, syllable count correct,,good luck,,blessings sueellen
Comment Written 22-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2013
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Thank you
Comment from KG Writes
Dear Unknown Author, I have to say that this gave me a chuckle. It is very direct and right on. Your illustration compliments your piece wonderfully. Good job. Very best of luck in the contest. KG Writes
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2013
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Dear Unknown Author, I have to say that this gave me a chuckle. It is very direct and right on. Your illustration compliments your piece wonderfully. Good job. Very best of luck in the contest. KG Writes
Comment Written 22-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2013
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Thank you
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Mystery Writer, You are most welcome and again, very best wishes in the contest. Enjoy your evening. KG Writes
Comment from Matoshka
Your words so fit your picture, and I even giggled at it. So glad the blood suckers have gone home for the year. I really enjoyed it. Blessings and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2013
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Your words so fit your picture, and I even giggled at it. So glad the blood suckers have gone home for the year. I really enjoyed it. Blessings and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2013
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Thank you
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Comment from RYME4U
This tells the Dracula story in a nutshell. Well done.Your descriptive phrases are good. The artwork you chose is a great match. Good job!
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2013
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This tells the Dracula story in a nutshell. Well done.Your descriptive phrases are good. The artwork you chose is a great match. Good job!
Comment Written 21-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2013
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Thank you
Comment from cleo85
This says it all!
I always have admired people who are able to put the essence a Novel of 17 syllables.
I am just an artist, not much of a writer. I cannot give technical advice, but I like what you wrote.
Thank you for using my picture.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2013
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This says it all!
I always have admired people who are able to put the essence a Novel of 17 syllables.
I am just an artist, not much of a writer. I cannot give technical advice, but I like what you wrote.
Thank you for using my picture.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2013
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Thank you
Comment from Meta4ors
Good luck in the 5-7-5 contest with this very good piece. "shroud of black, vampire bat, fangs drawing blood" key descriptors staked this one to the heart, whoops!! HA-HA!
Nicely done.
-meta
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2013
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Good luck in the 5-7-5 contest with this very good piece. "shroud of black, vampire bat, fangs drawing blood" key descriptors staked this one to the heart, whoops!! HA-HA!
Nicely done.
-meta
Comment Written 21-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2013
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Thank you-liked the joke
Comment from Jackarrie
Dressed in shroud of black
transforms into vampire bat
fangs revealed, draws blood.
This is a very good entry for the contest, well done.
good luck in the contest. Mary
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2013
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Dressed in shroud of black
transforms into vampire bat
fangs revealed, draws blood.
This is a very good entry for the contest, well done.
good luck in the contest. Mary
Comment Written 21-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2013
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Thank you