The Heart of Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 32 "Free"'Tis not the Bard, but pretty good poetry anyway
21 total reviews
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Hi Carolyn,
Strong post for Independence day - hope you had a great day. This is well penned and your syllables are perfect.
I really loved line three.
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen
Flags fly July Fourth 5
Grateful American, me!7
Peace and Liberty 5
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2013
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Hi Carolyn,
Strong post for Independence day - hope you had a great day. This is well penned and your syllables are perfect.
I really loved line three.
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen
Flags fly July Fourth 5
Grateful American, me!7
Peace and Liberty 5
Comment Written 07-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2013
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Thanks Maureen, I am glad you enjoyed this. I did have a great day. Hopefully you are doing well. :-) Carolyn
Comment from 9999pool
A great message to all for National Day 4th July. With the birth of this day, a great nation conceived in liberty and governance by the people for the people!
Great write and well expressed.
cheerio, hugs, Ritchie.
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2013
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A great message to all for National Day 4th July. With the birth of this day, a great nation conceived in liberty and governance by the people for the people!
Great write and well expressed.
cheerio, hugs, Ritchie.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2013
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Thank you so much for the great review. :-) Carolyn
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Welcome and cherrio, Ritchie. Hugs. :))
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Have a great weekend too dear. Cheerio, Ritchie.
Comment from Gungalo
Flags fly July Fourth
Grateful American, me!
Peace and Liberty
Fine write and a fine attitude to take girl. It's a beautiful thing to see our flag flying in the wind.
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2013
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Flags fly July Fourth
Grateful American, me!
Peace and Liberty
Fine write and a fine attitude to take girl. It's a beautiful thing to see our flag flying in the wind.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2013
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Glad you liked it and relate. Have a great day. Carolyn
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Smile girlie.
Comment from Kingsland
Our freedoms are very fragile and are all about to end, unless we make a stand. There is far too much flag waving in this country. We need to stand up and demand the rescinding of the Patriot Act...
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2013
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Our freedoms are very fragile and are all about to end, unless we make a stand. There is far too much flag waving in this country. We need to stand up and demand the rescinding of the Patriot Act...
Comment Written 05-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2013
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I appreciate your review very much and hear what you are saying. Carolyn
Comment from Spitfire
We forget that many members on FS live in other countries and are inspired I hope by American posts. Good alliteration with flags fly and rhyme of me and liberty.
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2013
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We forget that many members on FS live in other countries and are inspired I hope by American posts. Good alliteration with flags fly and rhyme of me and liberty.
Comment Written 05-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2013
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Thank you Shari, look at my profile page when you have time. A sweet young author from India sent a special gift for the 4th. We are so blessed to have world-wide friends on FS. I appreciate your comments. Carolyn
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Checked out the picture. Awesome, Carolyn. Yes, it's great to make friends all over the world.
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes this is well written my friend I liked the positivity enclosed in the short form well done my friend I enjoyed regards Jill
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2013
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Yes this is well written my friend I liked the positivity enclosed in the short form well done my friend I enjoyed regards Jill
Comment Written 05-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2013
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Thank you Jill
Comment from Sagnik Das
My Dear Carolyn,
Please do condescend, I beseech, to spare a glance at the absolute bottom of your profile-page - there's something awaiting you there - almost impatiently, since yesterday ............. (LOL) . I for one do fervently guess that nothing better can ever serve a worthier review than that, to this highly patriotic piece ..... Hence, Lady, Behold Thy "mighty" profile ... & let me know if you choose to will !! :D
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2013
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My Dear Carolyn,
Please do condescend, I beseech, to spare a glance at the absolute bottom of your profile-page - there's something awaiting you there - almost impatiently, since yesterday ............. (LOL) . I for one do fervently guess that nothing better can ever serve a worthier review than that, to this highly patriotic piece ..... Hence, Lady, Behold Thy "mighty" profile ... & let me know if you choose to will !! :D
Comment Written 05-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2013
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Thank you in advance for what I will find on my profile page. I am glad you liked my short little poem. :-) Carolyn
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Hmm, ... Carolyn, you therefore better hasten !! LOL !
Comment from bichonfrisegirl
I wish you well always too, Carolyn. Your Author Notes are very sweet, as is your poem.
Yes, we have soooo much to be grateful for, don't we.
A very good 5/7/5 ... so much said in so few words!
bichonfrisegirl aka Connie
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2013
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I wish you well always too, Carolyn. Your Author Notes are very sweet, as is your poem.
Yes, we have soooo much to be grateful for, don't we.
A very good 5/7/5 ... so much said in so few words!
bichonfrisegirl aka Connie
Comment Written 05-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2013
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Thank you so much for your continued encouragement..Carolyn
Comment from Black_Oxygen
Well Done ~ Carolyn
With very few words, this poetry speaks a huge
mouth full. It is the appropriate poem for the
appropriate time. The attached photo is a giant
accent that enhances the message. Thank You for
your creation.
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2013
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Well Done ~ Carolyn
With very few words, this poetry speaks a huge
mouth full. It is the appropriate poem for the
appropriate time. The attached photo is a giant
accent that enhances the message. Thank You for
your creation.
Comment Written 05-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2013
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You are welcome, I am happy you enjoyed this one. Carolyn
Comment from MizKat
Hi Carolyn,
Your poem about the 4th of July is wonderful. You say a lot in few words and syllables. Instead of it being a 5-7-5 poem it is a 6-8-5 poem. July has two syllables, grateful has two and American has three.
Your author notes say such nice things also. I enjoy reading them too.
Have a wonderful day, Kat
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2013
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Hi Carolyn,
Your poem about the 4th of July is wonderful. You say a lot in few words and syllables. Instead of it being a 5-7-5 poem it is a 6-8-5 poem. July has two syllables, grateful has two and American has three.
Your author notes say such nice things also. I enjoy reading them too.
Have a wonderful day, Kat
Comment Written 05-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2013
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I think I may need to entitle this, Just a poem... Thanks Kat, for the comments. :-) Carolyn
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I hope you're not angry at me for pointing out that it's longer than a 5-7-5 poem. I think it would be nice to entitle it, just a poem. Kat
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Kat, Take a look, I may have fixed it without losing part of the message. Let me know, ok. and don't worry. The truth never makes me angry, in fact not much of anything makes me angry. :-) Carolyn