I'm Not the Woman (EEE's version)
A little self-introspection39 total reviews
Comment from poetbear
Wow!
Oprah would be shocked and impressed with the way you used your words and poetic devices to let it out and say it proudly.
I think you looked at what you saw from within and brought it with pictures or not.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2011
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Wow!
Oprah would be shocked and impressed with the way you used your words and poetic devices to let it out and say it proudly.
I think you looked at what you saw from within and brought it with pictures or not.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2011
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thanks, again, poetbear -- you must be working your way through my portfolio -- love, jan
Comment from Summer Falls
This poem flowed well and the rhythm made for an easy read. I know you are having a time with Evil Eddie, but see if you can change the size of the text. The tiny font makes it hard to read.
This was an excellent poem with a good message.
summergirl
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2009
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This poem flowed well and the rhythm made for an easy read. I know you are having a time with Evil Eddie, but see if you can change the size of the text. The tiny font makes it hard to read.
This was an excellent poem with a good message.
summergirl
Comment Written 01-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2009
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thanks, summergirl. I'll see what I can do. love, jan
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You are welcome
Comment from mmichelle97219
Inreally liked the poem but geez the tiny print is horrible. You should email tom about it. Beautiful poem.
Happy Writing
Michelle
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2009
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Inreally liked the poem but geez the tiny print is horrible. You should email tom about it. Beautiful poem.
Happy Writing
Michelle
Comment Written 01-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2009
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thanks, Michelle. I'll try to talk to Tom about that. I didn't realize that was an option. love, jan
Comment from Artasylum
this is a novel or a slice of life movie all in one beautiful poem. thanks as always for your wisdom and love...HAPPY NEW YEAR. Diana
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2009
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this is a novel or a slice of life movie all in one beautiful poem. thanks as always for your wisdom and love...HAPPY NEW YEAR. Diana
Comment Written 31-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2009
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thanks, Diana. yeah, once I got started, I couldn't seem to stop. love, jan
Comment from Nanette Mary
Hullo Rdfrdmom ....
In spite of what has been done to your "work of art" by
EEE as you call the Editor .... it must have done you a lot of good to express these thoughts on paper even though some of your readers may not really understand what it is all about - including me.
I read your Notes as well and .... now it is time to wish you a very Happy and successful New Year with a better working relationship with EEE.
With love from ..... Nanette Mary.
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2008
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Hullo Rdfrdmom ....
In spite of what has been done to your "work of art" by
EEE as you call the Editor .... it must have done you a lot of good to express these thoughts on paper even though some of your readers may not really understand what it is all about - including me.
I read your Notes as well and .... now it is time to wish you a very Happy and successful New Year with a better working relationship with EEE.
With love from ..... Nanette Mary.
Comment Written 31-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2008
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Thanks, Nanette Mary. I don't understand why some pieces can be cut & pasted beautifully and others just get blasted all over creation. Oh, well. I'll keep daring him and see what happens. :>) love, jan
Comment from Showboat
SHOOT that sucker. Man, don't you positively go balistic when that happens. I refuse to use him in any way and he STILL manages to infest my stuff with superfluous line spacings or no line spacings at all.
Let's get a rope and hang him!
Great poem,
Hugs,
Gayle
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2008
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SHOOT that sucker. Man, don't you positively go balistic when that happens. I refuse to use him in any way and he STILL manages to infest my stuff with superfluous line spacings or no line spacings at all.
Let's get a rope and hang him!
Great poem,
Hugs,
Gayle
Comment Written 31-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2008
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isn't that the truth -- and even after I made all those changes, I still had to edit a half dozen times to get the spacing right. I'd shoot him if I could find him, no doubt. love, jan
Comment from rmdelta
This was terrific, Jan. Excellent poem and an even more outstanding message. I noticed your notes explained White Trash was two columned. I never understand poetry that well, so I can't understand why Trainer is way over there on the other side. lol Just me.
Beautiful writing, Jan.
Reggie
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2008
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This was terrific, Jan. Excellent poem and an even more outstanding message. I noticed your notes explained White Trash was two columned. I never understand poetry that well, so I can't understand why Trainer is way over there on the other side. lol Just me.
Beautiful writing, Jan.
Reggie
Comment Written 31-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2008
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I've tried to fix it two dozen times and evil eddie just won't let me so I have just given up on it. lol. love, jan
Comment from KYPollard/El Gato
This is a well written poem of triumph of the spirit. It was truly my pleasure to read. Keep going where the Lord leads and be the woman HE meant for you to be!
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2008
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This is a well written poem of triumph of the spirit. It was truly my pleasure to read. Keep going where the Lord leads and be the woman HE meant for you to be!
Comment Written 30-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2008
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absolutely. thanks, El Gato. love, jan
Comment from Kit Minden
Excellent declaration of strength and recovery. Way to go!
Consider whether cleaner should just be clean - might be easier to read when the author isn't present to give emphasis.
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2008
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Excellent declaration of strength and recovery. Way to go!
Consider whether cleaner should just be clean - might be easier to read when the author isn't present to give emphasis.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2008
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I'll go back and check that, Kit. thanks.
Comment from Judian James
None of us are who we think we are half the time and certainly not how many others may see us ever. This is a true rendering from the gut and I think it's great Jan!
The editor is incredibly frustrating for us all!!
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2008
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None of us are who we think we are half the time and certainly not how many others may see us ever. This is a true rendering from the gut and I think it's great Jan!
The editor is incredibly frustrating for us all!!
Comment Written 30-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2008
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thanks, Judian. great praise from our #1 poet. love, jan