As Good As Better Men
He always was35 total reviews
Comment from Janelle
Gees Chris, I'm sobbing! This is truly beautiful! I have come across so many elderly couples just like this one, each hanging on to the other as if they were their own private life raft in this sea of life and uncertainty. I really loved the title, is was really special and the picture accomanying it was perfect. The six is awared for all of the above. Now where is that extra box of tissues! :( Regards, Jan
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2009
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Gees Chris, I'm sobbing! This is truly beautiful! I have come across so many elderly couples just like this one, each hanging on to the other as if they were their own private life raft in this sea of life and uncertainty. I really loved the title, is was really special and the picture accomanying it was perfect. The six is awared for all of the above. Now where is that extra box of tissues! :( Regards, Jan
Comment Written 17-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2009
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You know, I think all of us poets/writers have a few favourites of their own, and this is one of mine. I'm thrilled you enjoyed this, as I am very proud of it. I cried when I wrote it, which tells me i'm a Master Narcissist (tho' I don't always laugh at my own jokes ...)!! Nah, this review makes me one VERY happy & proud lady; thanks so much xoxoxoxoxoxo
Comment from jshep
When you write these long stories they are so powerful they take your breath away. Another masterfully written piece. The emotion pours forth from your words. I can offer nothing that should be changed in this piece. Your skills are soaring. Excellent poem. Probably another top candidate for a poem of the month. Joyce
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2008
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When you write these long stories they are so powerful they take your breath away. Another masterfully written piece. The emotion pours forth from your words. I can offer nothing that should be changed in this piece. Your skills are soaring. Excellent poem. Probably another top candidate for a poem of the month. Joyce
Comment Written 06-Oct-2008
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2008
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Ah, we'll see about that, eh? It just makes me smile that you think so much of my work, so for all accounts, it's a winner anyway. Thanks again, so very much, for always encouraging me my friend xoxoxoxoxoxo
Comment from Nanette Mary
Hullo Alpacalady ....
This is a beautiful piece of writing and I enjoyed reading what you have written. There is nothing that I would suggest changing really, although in a few lines, there is room for improvement in your metre.
Thank you for sharing this with us.
With love from .... Nanette Mary.
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2008
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Hullo Alpacalady ....
This is a beautiful piece of writing and I enjoyed reading what you have written. There is nothing that I would suggest changing really, although in a few lines, there is room for improvement in your metre.
Thank you for sharing this with us.
With love from .... Nanette Mary.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2008
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2008
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Thanks very much Nanette for your kind words and the 5 stars. Your observation of the meter being out is very astute - it is the very bane of my existence as commas and semi-colons are for me in prose! Will get it right one day...
Again, thanks so much for encouragement and observations! xoxoxoxoxoxo
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I have written an article about how to attain a good, regular metre in the lines of a poem. If you send me your e.mail address through the message box, I will forward a copy of the article to you. Love - N.M.
Comment from Kentucky Sweet Pea
Oh well, easy come, easy go. I've used up both my sixes and I just couldn't help it. Chris, this is absolutely beautiful! STUNNING! My God woman, where did you come from? You're so talented it kills me. I am not kidding you, babe. You move me beyond belief and this is awesome!
Love you,
Pen
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2008
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Oh well, easy come, easy go. I've used up both my sixes and I just couldn't help it. Chris, this is absolutely beautiful! STUNNING! My God woman, where did you come from? You're so talented it kills me. I am not kidding you, babe. You move me beyond belief and this is awesome!
Love you,
Pen
Comment Written 05-Oct-2008
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2008
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Ye Gods woman, coming from someone whose work has the same ability for me, I am a touch speechless - if that's possible for a Cancerian!. My dear, I come from the same place as you, trust me.
THANK YOU for your kind words, 6 stars and all your continued support and encouragement. Brings a BIG smile when I need it most. Love you too! xoxoxoxoxoxo
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there are so many of us cancers here it boggles my mind. louise, you, me, i think 2moon is and there are more, just can't think right now. is polly the only one that isn't? lol!
Comment from giftid3
This is really beautiful and so touching.
The imagery you have painted with your words gives way to a love so deep and abiding that calms even the darkest of beasts that manifest in the mind of times gone by. The beauty and adoration held for an angel so warm and gentle flows well from beginning to end, while the fear and anguish of the author gives one a sense of dread and failing. And then as if in acknowledgement, the angel smiles her precious smile, and he finally sees in her eyes what she has always seen, a man who is as good as better men.
This is awesome, I loved the journey taken and the experience it caused. Thanks and many blessings to you
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2008
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This is really beautiful and so touching.
The imagery you have painted with your words gives way to a love so deep and abiding that calms even the darkest of beasts that manifest in the mind of times gone by. The beauty and adoration held for an angel so warm and gentle flows well from beginning to end, while the fear and anguish of the author gives one a sense of dread and failing. And then as if in acknowledgement, the angel smiles her precious smile, and he finally sees in her eyes what she has always seen, a man who is as good as better men.
This is awesome, I loved the journey taken and the experience it caused. Thanks and many blessings to you
Comment Written 05-Oct-2008
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2008
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Gee, your words had me shaking my head. When someone really READS what one has written, understands it and expresses enjoyment as you have, it is the best feeling imaginable.
I thank you and send many blessings back your way for this awesome review xoxoxoxoxo
Comment from Artasylum
i love the style you have chosen for this poem it reads like butter and it is a necessary subject and good read...yours, diana
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2008
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i love the style you have chosen for this poem it reads like butter and it is a necessary subject and good read...yours, diana
Comment Written 04-Oct-2008
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2008
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Thanks so very much Diana. It's always excellent to get such a great review from someone whose work I admire on here xoxooxoxoxo
Comment from PatriciaLiteHickman
This is a very well written and creative story in a poem; sad, but realistic and heartwarming at the same time; well done, no corrections!
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2008
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This is a very well written and creative story in a poem; sad, but realistic and heartwarming at the same time; well done, no corrections!
Comment Written 04-Oct-2008
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2008
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Thanks very much astrolite. I'm glad you enjoyed this and appreciate you stopping by! xoxoxoxoxxo
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You are very welcome for the review :-) Blessings on your night, (or day) Tricia
Comment from Perpetua
What a beautiful poem. It's both sad and wonderful at the same time. I love the lines:
"Now I hold her wrinkled hand, the wedding band so thin
It lost its shine some years ago, as she's lost hers, within"
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"Those violet eyes slide open, softly smiling once again
Within their depths, they show a man as good as better men."
Thanks so much for sharing this.
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2008
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What a beautiful poem. It's both sad and wonderful at the same time. I love the lines:
"Now I hold her wrinkled hand, the wedding band so thin
It lost its shine some years ago, as she's lost hers, within"
and
"Those violet eyes slide open, softly smiling once again
Within their depths, they show a man as good as better men."
Thanks so much for sharing this.
Comment Written 04-Oct-2008
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2008
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Thanks so much for this great review Perpetua, and the six stars are eye candy indeed! I'm so glad you enjoyed this one - it's good to see you stopping by again! xoxoxoxoxo
Comment from LadyMary
This is deeply profound and one can sense all the emotions of lives long shared together and facing loss. To have found one's soulmate after experiencing the horrors of war and loneliness was truly a blessing. The choice of wording and rhyme allow the reader to visualize each step along the way. Excellent. LadyMary
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2008
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This is deeply profound and one can sense all the emotions of lives long shared together and facing loss. To have found one's soulmate after experiencing the horrors of war and loneliness was truly a blessing. The choice of wording and rhyme allow the reader to visualize each step along the way. Excellent. LadyMary
Comment Written 04-Oct-2008
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2008
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Thanks so very much LadyMary xoxoxoxoxo
Comment from dkneale
What a wonderful heartfelt poetic song, yas a sadness, but very elegantly laid out and the magery was wonderful...A tribute for sure...Very beautifully written, Thank you for sharing...DLK
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2008
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What a wonderful heartfelt poetic song, yas a sadness, but very elegantly laid out and the magery was wonderful...A tribute for sure...Very beautifully written, Thank you for sharing...DLK
Comment Written 04-Oct-2008
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2008
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Thanks very much for your wonderful review and kind words DLK xoxoxoxooxo