Comment from Mrs Anna Howard

Excellent

Wow! This poem is so bittersweet. With simple words, the author delivered an impactful poem about remembering loved ones. For a brief moment, I can sense them in the room with the author. What a great way to keep their stories alive.

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 28-Jan-2025

Thank you for this thoughtful review. It's very appreciated.

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

Thank you for sharing this well-crafted kyrielle about remembering lost relatives. I think the theme lends itself well to this format with its repeated last line in each stanza. The image is beautifully poignant and complements the verse well. Good luck! Debbie

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 28-Jan-2025

Thank you for reading my poem. It's always nice to hear from you. :)

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Our memories are special and keep us in touch with all the love that has passed. I miss the days when my children were young as we had a busy household with lots of voices expressing their opinions and I miss those days. Your poem has magical rhymes and I adored the sentiment, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2025

Thank you for this thoughtful review. :)

Comment from Carol Clark2

Excellent

This Kyrielle is well written, with a good repeating line that emphasizes the memories of each stanza. Your meter and rhymes are good. One fix: (They're) all gone now. I'm sorry for the loss of your loved ones. Best wishes in the contest. Carol

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2025

Thanks so much. My sister's name was Carol. I appreciate this nice review. :)