Dwelling on Death
Some nights I spend...9 total reviews
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Thank you for sharing this decidedly ghoulish-themed poem, Sharon! It's well-matched to the creepy image and I like the way the fear seems genuine and evolves throughout to give the impression of a tortuous, sleepless night. Well done and good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2025
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Thank you for sharing this decidedly ghoulish-themed poem, Sharon! It's well-matched to the creepy image and I like the way the fear seems genuine and evolves throughout to give the impression of a tortuous, sleepless night. Well done and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 27-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2025
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Thank you, it does make for sleepless nights.
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Well versed. I understand.
This getting old has surpassed by getting older, and more recently, now that I am 77 has gotten olderer.
May peace reign in your soul, if not your heart.
I worry not of the future, as I am the captain of my ship, and if I sail to hellish waters, so be it, I have no one else to blame. On the other hand if I am forgiven, and if there is a heaven I believe so, I am better of then those that don't, and if I am wrong, I will be no worse off then they would, right.
Heck I carried on so well, I may make this a story and release.
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2025
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Well versed. I understand.
This getting old has surpassed by getting older, and more recently, now that I am 77 has gotten olderer.
May peace reign in your soul, if not your heart.
I worry not of the future, as I am the captain of my ship, and if I sail to hellish waters, so be it, I have no one else to blame. On the other hand if I am forgiven, and if there is a heaven I believe so, I am better of then those that don't, and if I am wrong, I will be no worse off then they would, right.
Heck I carried on so well, I may make this a story and release.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2025
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You have such a positive attitude. Thanks so much for this great review.
Comment from Amelie Johns
You have captured in this poem the thoughts that occupy many people's minds but that most us do not speak of. As humans, we are born with a death sentence. The thoughts you speak of, I have had since I was a young child. While other kids played away, I spent much time pondering about existence, the universe, this life, what came before and what comes after. I remember asking my father one day - 'where will you be in 150 years?'. He stared out the window with a worried look on his face and said 'i'll be gone on a long holiday.' Even my child brain could tell he was afraid and didn't have a clue. It only added to my anxiety. After all my years of wondering and stressing, it got me nowhere.
There is so much we do not understand and will never understand. The stereotypical impression people have of death is scary but the research into people who have experienced near-death experiences is the complete opposite of scary. Everybody has the thoughts you describe and we are all on the same journey. Living itself is dying in slow motion when you think about it and nobody can avoid it. Some just happen to have more time than others. None of us even know how much time we have left. We must live in this moment and not think too far ahead.
Thank you for sharing this wonderful poem. I am fortunate have okay health as far as I know but I certainly do experience what you describe here. You are not alone.
Best wishes,
Amelie
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2025
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You have captured in this poem the thoughts that occupy many people's minds but that most us do not speak of. As humans, we are born with a death sentence. The thoughts you speak of, I have had since I was a young child. While other kids played away, I spent much time pondering about existence, the universe, this life, what came before and what comes after. I remember asking my father one day - 'where will you be in 150 years?'. He stared out the window with a worried look on his face and said 'i'll be gone on a long holiday.' Even my child brain could tell he was afraid and didn't have a clue. It only added to my anxiety. After all my years of wondering and stressing, it got me nowhere.
There is so much we do not understand and will never understand. The stereotypical impression people have of death is scary but the research into people who have experienced near-death experiences is the complete opposite of scary. Everybody has the thoughts you describe and we are all on the same journey. Living itself is dying in slow motion when you think about it and nobody can avoid it. Some just happen to have more time than others. None of us even know how much time we have left. We must live in this moment and not think too far ahead.
Thank you for sharing this wonderful poem. I am fortunate have okay health as far as I know but I certainly do experience what you describe here. You are not alone.
Best wishes,
Amelie
Comment Written 27-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2025
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Thank you for this terrific review. I really appreciate it. :)
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
This is a great ghoulish poem to enter in the contest. I think, because of your health problems it makes you more aware of your fragility and that's what keeps you awake at night.
Well done and good luck in the contest.
Cecilia
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2025
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This is a great ghoulish poem to enter in the contest. I think, because of your health problems it makes you more aware of your fragility and that's what keeps you awake at night.
Well done and good luck in the contest.
Cecilia
Comment Written 26-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2025
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Thanks so much, l appreciate this nice review. :)
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You're welcome
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I'm sorry you are suffering with some illness just now and it must make you frightened, your words reflect your constant fear here, a well written poem for the contest, take good care of yourself, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2025
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I'm sorry you are suffering with some illness just now and it must make you frightened, your words reflect your constant fear here, a well written poem for the contest, take good care of yourself, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 26-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2025
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Thanks so much for this thoughtful review, l'm always glad to hear from you. :)
Comment from jim vecchio
I have had many health problems recently. I am aware Dewth can come at any time, and everyone has some kind of fear of the unknown. But, I trust in The Lord and believe He has a place reserved for all who believe in Him.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2025
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I have had many health problems recently. I am aware Dewth can come at any time, and everyone has some kind of fear of the unknown. But, I trust in The Lord and believe He has a place reserved for all who believe in Him.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2025
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As do l. I fear though, that leaving my family and never seeing then again would be too much for me to take. The Lord willing though, you and l will both be around for a long time. I'm so glad for your review. Thank you for taking the time to read my poem.
Comment from Chrissy710
Hi Sharon
Wow a thought provoking poem and I try not to think of my demise but sometimes wonder what if
a great poem for the con should do well
Stay safe and well
Cheers Chris
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2025
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Hi Sharon
Wow a thought provoking poem and I try not to think of my demise but sometimes wonder what if
a great poem for the con should do well
Stay safe and well
Cheers Chris
Comment Written 26-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2025
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Thanks so much, I'm so glad to hear from you. :)
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Well you have certainly ticked off the ghoulish thoughts challenge here. I used to wake between 2-3 am with similar thoughts but have gotten past that now. I enjoyed your poem and wish you luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2025
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Well you have certainly ticked off the ghoulish thoughts challenge here. I used to wake between 2-3 am with similar thoughts but have gotten past that now. I enjoyed your poem and wish you luck in the contest.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2025
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Thank you so much for this thoughtful review. I think it's my many health problems, including congestive heart failure that's causing these thoughts. Thanks again for reading. ❤️❤️
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Wow, this was such a gothic poem, and sometimes I find contemplating myself in the dark thoughts, and I am grateful for the break of dawn:"In the day, sunlight and flowers,
help to keep these thoughts at bay,
in shadows deep, my darkest hours,
death robs me of my sleep."
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2025
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Wow, this was such a gothic poem, and sometimes I find contemplating myself in the dark thoughts, and I am grateful for the break of dawn:"In the day, sunlight and flowers,
help to keep these thoughts at bay,
in shadows deep, my darkest hours,
death robs me of my sleep."
Comment Written 26-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2025
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Thank you, I appreciate this great review.
