Man's First Breath
It took God to breathe into Adams mouth to live2 total reviews
Comment from patcelaw
Every breath that we take is given to us by God and I enjoyed your entry in the contest and I wish you the very best on the contest. May you have a wonderful weekend and may God bless you. Patricia.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2025
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Every breath that we take is given to us by God and I enjoyed your entry in the contest and I wish you the very best on the contest. May you have a wonderful weekend and may God bless you. Patricia.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2025
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Yes and Amen to every breath comes from God!
Thank you for your review.
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
This is a great cinquain poem. It is a perfect one showing how Adam was made. Then God didn't want Adam alone so he made woman. The rest is history.
Well done and good luck in the contest.
Cecilia
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2025
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This is a great cinquain poem. It is a perfect one showing how Adam was made. Then God didn't want Adam alone so he made woman. The rest is history.
Well done and good luck in the contest.
Cecilia
Comment Written 25-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2025
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Thank you Cecilia for reviewing. Enjoy your weekend.
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You're welcome
