Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

We grieve and we have to move on to live a good life, but our memories sometimes haunt us as loss is hard to deal with. I would lighten the text here so that is is readable. I had to zoom in to see it, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2025

Thanks Dolly, for your thoughts,rating, and advice. I took your advice and fixed my poem. Have a good evening and God bless!

Comment from Barry Penfold

Excellent

Great image and true and nice wording. Thanks for sharing and all the best for the competition. Take care and have a wonderful day.
Regards
Barry Penfold.

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2025

Thanks Barry, for your thoughts and rating. Have a good evening and God bless!