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Rhyming Children's poem2 total reviews
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your poem is full of such fun! I love how you capture the simple joys of being a little one. I enjoyed the part where you imitate animals like lions and bunnies. The ending, with the kiss from Mommy and the sweet "Good night" wraps everything up in a heartwarming way. What a joyful poem! Keep having fun with your words!
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2025
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Your poem is full of such fun! I love how you capture the simple joys of being a little one. I enjoyed the part where you imitate animals like lions and bunnies. The ending, with the kiss from Mommy and the sweet "Good night" wraps everything up in a heartwarming way. What a joyful poem! Keep having fun with your words!
Comment Written 23-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2025
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Thank you, Michael for your kind review! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Your poem includes all the activities kids enjoy and I can just feel their excitement in this wonderful poem for the contest and I wish you luck with this one, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2025
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Your poem includes all the activities kids enjoy and I can just feel their excitement in this wonderful poem for the contest and I wish you luck with this one, love Dolly x
Comment Written 23-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2025
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Thank you for the review, comments, and well wishes!
