Perdition
Sleep-walking to disaster4 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Trerry,
The is nicely done rondeau.
I am right there with you in my fear for the planet. We are destroying faster than we think we are. All these natural disasters are probably made worse by global warming.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a wonderful weekend
Joan
P S I would like you to know that I just published my first book titled
"The Interloper and other stories in prose and poetry". It is available on Amazon.com and there is a link to it at the bottom of my profile bio. I wouldn't have been able to do this without the help and encouragement of fellow Fanstorians.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2025
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Hi Trerry,
The is nicely done rondeau.
I am right there with you in my fear for the planet. We are destroying faster than we think we are. All these natural disasters are probably made worse by global warming.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a wonderful weekend
Joan
P S I would like you to know that I just published my first book titled
"The Interloper and other stories in prose and poetry". It is available on Amazon.com and there is a link to it at the bottom of my profile bio. I wouldn't have been able to do this without the help and encouragement of fellow Fanstorians.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2025
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Thanks, Joan. Good luck with the book!
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No problem Terry.
I appreciate the good luck wishes for the my book.
Joan
Comment from Mrs Anna Howard
I'm not familiar enough with Rondeau Poetry to analyze the artistic quality of this work. But as a lay reader, I really enjoy your poem. It's heavy and amped up my anxiety a notched, which is probably what it's supposed to do given the grim reality of it all. Thanks for writing and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2025
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I'm not familiar enough with Rondeau Poetry to analyze the artistic quality of this work. But as a lay reader, I really enjoy your poem. It's heavy and amped up my anxiety a notched, which is probably what it's supposed to do given the grim reality of it all. Thanks for writing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2025
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Thank you.
Comment from Lana Marie
Yeah, how much more can the planet take. We just have to keep on moving and keep on believing until the day the Lord calls us home. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2025
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Yeah, how much more can the planet take. We just have to keep on moving and keep on believing until the day the Lord calls us home. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2025
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Thank you, Lana Marie.
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
This is a great Rondeau poem. It follows all the rules of the contest. We are destroying our planet everyday and most won't see it till it's too late.
Jesus is coming soon!
Good luck in the contest
Cecilia
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2025
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This is a great Rondeau poem. It follows all the rules of the contest. We are destroying our planet everyday and most won't see it till it's too late.
Jesus is coming soon!
Good luck in the contest
Cecilia
Comment Written 22-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2025
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Thank you, Cecilia.
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You're welcome
