Comment from
Michael Ludwinder
I really love the energy in your poem! The upbeat tone creates such a joyful feeling. "Yippee-yah-yay-hurray" adds such a fun touch! I also love how you ended with "Yahweh" and "Yes". For me it gives such an uplifting feel. Keep spreading that good energy with your writing!
Comment Written 21-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2025
Thank you, Michael! What a nice review and encouraging comments. Thanks for stopping in. I appreciate it! Have a wonderful day.
Comment from
Julie G1
Well expressed. This verse presents a very expressive and inspiring response to the intriguing format of the prompt. The poet's message of faith must never be discouraged.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2025
Thank you, Julie! I appreciate your comments, it's really tough entering these competitions since there's so many amazing writers and most of them enter things that sounds so poetic with the choice of words that they use. Mine are always so basic lol
Enjoy your day!