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Affirmation

Finding truth amidst the props . . .

8 total reviews 
Comment from Sally Law
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Dear Yvette,
Sorry to have missed this one, my talented friend. I don't get to all the contests anyone. It's here and there at best. A marvelous offering and beautiful in presentation. Congratulations on your ribbon! Yay!
Sending you my best today as always.
Sal XOs

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2025

reply by the author on 29-Jan-2025
    Never apologize, Lady Sal -- you know life happens, right!? :) ;) But thanx so much for taking the time on this one... it was a bit different for me, but I like a challenge! Take care out there! :) ;) Yvette
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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I like the imaginative theme of this well-shaped diatelle as the mask is removed and an adventure of fun begins in the firelight, finding the real truth behind the disguise. Well done and good luck! Debbie

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2025

reply by the author on 22-Jan-2025
    Thank you for your insightful review.
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
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This is a great Diatelle poem. It follows all the rules of the contest. It flows nicely from beginning to end. The words are very ominous.


Great job and good luck in the contest.

Cecilia

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2025

reply by the author on 21-Jan-2025
    Thank you for your thoughtful review today.
reply by Cecilia A Heiskary on 21-Jan-2025
    You're welcome
Comment from Bill Schott
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This diatelle, Affirmation, has the proper formatting and seems to show the lifting of the masks has revealed two people enjoying a moment of revelation, Nice.

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2025

reply by the author on 21-Jan-2025
    Thank you for your review on this chilly morning!
Comment from Lana Marie
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This is a very nice display and a great entry for this contest. You added a little bit of humor with this playful banter between a flask and the warmth that they would feel with the consumption of the flasks contents. I personally could not play that game or I would be in bowing to the porcelain god for hours. I enjoyed your writing.

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2025

reply by the author on 21-Jan-2025
    Your review made me smile - Thank you!!
Comment from Tim Margetts
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What an interesting poem, it has an essence of romance, of seduction, and even perhaps a touch of the macabre. Yet it could also be a trial of inner demons, a friend who used to have a problem with drink told me how the bottles almost spoke to him, tempting him to take one more sip.
I like this poem.
Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2025

reply by the author on 21-Jan-2025
    Thanks so much for the review and comments... and, yeah, have heard similar.
Comment from Mrs Anna Howard
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Wow! Mysterious and super sexy! This is extremely well executed. Thank you for sharing this beautiful work. Please let me know if there will be a sequel.

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2025

reply by the author on 20-Jan-2025
    Oh, so glad you enjoyed!! Thank you for your great review!
Comment from Regina Elliott
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Romantic and breezy poem,
dear poet. My very best wishes for the contest with
this worthy entry. May you
have a warm and cozy
January evening and a creative week. Blessings ~

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2025

reply by the author on 20-Jan-2025
    Thanks so much for your review this cold Winter's evening!!