Night Sky
Diatelle Entry5 total reviews
Comment from Mrs Anna Howard
This is a very lyrical piece. I really enjoyed the internal rhyme. Well executed . Looking forward to reading more of your work.Best wishes for the contest.
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This is a very lyrical piece. I really enjoyed the internal rhyme. Well executed . Looking forward to reading more of your work.Best wishes for the contest.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2025
Comment from Tim Margetts
This is a gracefully written poem capturing the essence of the night.
I love the idea of the stars playing a lullaby for us as we drift into sleep, and then it ends with the promise of a new day dawning, bringing new hope and a refreshed breath into the soul.
Thank you for sharing.
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This is a gracefully written poem capturing the essence of the night.
I love the idea of the stars playing a lullaby for us as we drift into sleep, and then it ends with the promise of a new day dawning, bringing new hope and a refreshed breath into the soul.
Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2025
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Such a mysterious yet familiar topic choice - really like it! ;) A difficult form here, but a great message and vision you've delivered within such constraints... well done! ;) Thanx so much for sharing and best of luck! ;)
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Such a mysterious yet familiar topic choice - really like it! ;) A difficult form here, but a great message and vision you've delivered within such constraints... well done! ;) Thanx so much for sharing and best of luck! ;)
Comment Written 20-Jan-2025
Comment from Regina Elliott
Outstanding lunar poetry
contest entry, dear poet. My
very best wishes for the contest. May you have a warm cozy January evening if
you live in a region that's cold
this time of year. Blessings ~
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2025
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Outstanding lunar poetry
contest entry, dear poet. My
very best wishes for the contest. May you have a warm cozy January evening if
you live in a region that's cold
this time of year. Blessings ~
Comment Written 20-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2025
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Thanks for a very positive review. A chilly 12 degrees in KS right now. To use an unamerican expression that's bloody cold!!!
Comment from Iza Deleanu
I love your poem I think is one of the best entries for this contest, and I love the reverse image of night that becomes day in a shimmering wave of a mirror. Good luck with the contest and with your writings.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2025
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I love your poem I think is one of the best entries for this contest, and I love the reverse image of night that becomes day in a shimmering wave of a mirror. Good luck with the contest and with your writings.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2025
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Thank you for a very positive review.
