One-time chyme breaker
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Comment from Alexandra Trovato
Aww. Our syllable count is good. That is an adorable doggy. I'm understanding but probably not as well as you deserve. The meanings of some short poems go over my head. I will suggest a comma paused after the word twice. Good luck!
Best wishes,
Alex
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2025
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Aww. Our syllable count is good. That is an adorable doggy. I'm understanding but probably not as well as you deserve. The meanings of some short poems go over my head. I will suggest a comma paused after the word twice. Good luck!
Best wishes,
Alex
Comment Written 24-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2025
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Thank you so much Alex, and yeah is not easy to write something short... and sweet.
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You're right, Iza. You're welcome!
Alex
Comment from Darlene BoClair
An excellent lune poetry contest entry.
Each line is perfectly written. The photo shows the cutest dog. I wish you the best in winning the lune contest.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2025
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An excellent lune poetry contest entry.
Each line is perfectly written. The photo shows the cutest dog. I wish you the best in winning the lune contest.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2025
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Thank you so much, Darlene:)
Comment from Ric Myworld
I already knew that French and Italian were closely related to Spanish, but didn't realize that Romanian is too, until this morning. Now I know why I've always liked the way it sounds. Thanks for sharing.
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I already knew that French and Italian were closely related to Spanish, but didn't realize that Romanian is too, until this morning. Now I know why I've always liked the way it sounds. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2025
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Hee-hee! :) So glad to see your lively pen back, my lady, and what a fun lune to start the year off on a 'smileworthy' foot! ;) Thanx so much for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;) Yvette
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Hee-hee! :) So glad to see your lively pen back, my lady, and what a fun lune to start the year off on a 'smileworthy' foot! ;) Thanx so much for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 21-Jan-2025
Comment from kahpot
Ha! Ha! gorgeous photo, and what a wonderful and happy way to bring in the new year, i really hope the rest of this year is going to be so happy and memorable, very well presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
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Ha! Ha! gorgeous photo, and what a wonderful and happy way to bring in the new year, i really hope the rest of this year is going to be so happy and memorable, very well presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 20-Jan-2025
Comment from Regina Elliott
My very best wishes for the
lune contest with this charming and worthy entry
dear poet. The photo is a
great addition too. May you
have a warm cozy January
evening and a creative week.
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My very best wishes for the
lune contest with this charming and worthy entry
dear poet. The photo is a
great addition too. May you
have a warm cozy January
evening and a creative week.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2025
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Cute! both the contest entry and the photograph. I enjoyed reading. How could someone not enjoy that adorable will dog. Thank you for sharing this entry with us and good luck with the contest.
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Cute! both the contest entry and the photograph. I enjoyed reading. How could someone not enjoy that adorable will dog. Thank you for sharing this entry with us and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2025
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your poem is short but says a lot! I really enjoy the way you capture a moment here. It's a great example of how less can be more. You left me something to think about. Keep up the great work!
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Your poem is short but says a lot! I really enjoy the way you capture a moment here. It's a great example of how less can be more. You left me something to think about. Keep up the great work!
Comment Written 20-Jan-2025
Comment from Bill Schott
This lune, One-time Chyme Breaker, has the proper formatting and seems to be promoting this cute little New Year's representative............................
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This lune, One-time Chyme Breaker, has the proper formatting and seems to be promoting this cute little New Year's representative............................
Comment Written 20-Jan-2025
