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My Perky Mutt

Poetically choosing a dog to adopt.

2 total reviews 
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

I did enjoy this! Your little mutt looks just like our beloved Rusti Angel, who passed away I'm 2018. My you have many happy years with your new doggy, as we did with Rusti. She was a Yorkie, American Eskimo mix. I enjoyed your post.

Best wishes,

Alex

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2025

reply by the author on 20-Jan-2025
    Oh, thank you so much for this great review! We too have a dog that has passed away. They sure bring joy to our families. XOXO
Comment from kiwisteveh
Excellent
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Couldn't fit a turkey in there anywhere, huh?

I've always thought this was rather a weird form, but you've managed it well, with the possible exception of lurky!

I like how the AI pic just shows dogs literally bursting through the bars of their cages.

Steve


 Comment Written 19-Jan-2025

reply by the author on 19-Jan-2025
    Yes, I thought about using turkey, do you think that would be a better word than lurky? Also I told AI to only have the cute mutt coming out of the kennel but oh well.
    Thank you for reviewing
reply by kiwisteveh on 19-Jan-2025
    Ha! I see you've changed it already. Good for you. It goes well in that final line turkey strut!

    PS I have used Albuquerque for that rhyme in one of my poems but I guess that would do irreparable damage to your syllable count!
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2025
    Yes, I think you are correct lol about Albuquerque
    Although it would work Albuquerque jerky, turkey trot