Bible
Acrostic style x22 total reviews
Comment from Tim Margetts
I enjoyed this poem, thank you for it.
I love the way you use a twist on the Acrostic style to bring more depth to your elucidation of the Book.
Some of the lines come across as such a great flavour on the tongue, others more acrid in their word choice, punching the message home.
'the true cure to ruthless, mortal natures' - I love the inherent truth this brings with its simplicity.
Tim
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2025
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I enjoyed this poem, thank you for it.
I love the way you use a twist on the Acrostic style to bring more depth to your elucidation of the Book.
Some of the lines come across as such a great flavour on the tongue, others more acrid in their word choice, punching the message home.
'the true cure to ruthless, mortal natures' - I love the inherent truth this brings with its simplicity.
Tim
Comment Written 19-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2025
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Appreciated Tim. It is a dense book but the core messages are simple enough to understand.
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I know—it's a great read. I haven't read it cover to cover for a few years, but I have done so several times in the past and studied it in detail.
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That's awesome! I'm working on applying it daily to my personal life.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I really love how your poem highlights God's grace. The imagery of "blood-coated discourse" and "divine fountain pens" shows His purpose in guiding humanity. The way you speak about Christ's sacrifice and His connection to Earth is truly moving. It really captures the deep love God has for us. Keep sharing this beautiful reflection!
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2025
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I really love how your poem highlights God's grace. The imagery of "blood-coated discourse" and "divine fountain pens" shows His purpose in guiding humanity. The way you speak about Christ's sacrifice and His connection to Earth is truly moving. It really captures the deep love God has for us. Keep sharing this beautiful reflection!
Comment Written 19-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2025
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Thank you, Michael, for taking the time to read and review. I am happy when people are touched by the work in some way. I'm grateful that you were able to glean something meaningful from it. That means a lot to me as a writer.
